Replacepassivewith activevoiceFix asentencefragmentRephraseanawkwardsectionCut fillerwords orphrasesAdd asentenceRearrangethe orderofsentencesHighlightthe mainidea orthesisRearrangethe order ofparagraphsAdd morecontext toaparagraphReplacea vaguewordClarify aconfusingsentenceRemovesentencesthatdistractRemoverepetition(words)Swapout aclicheFill in aninformationgapFix arun-onsentenceReplaceasentenceRemove anunnecessarysentenceStrengthena sentenceAdd ahelpfuldetail intoa sentenceReplacea word foraccuracyRemoverepetition(sentences)Add atransitionphraseHighlightthe sowhatReplacepassivewith activevoiceFix asentencefragmentRephraseanawkwardsectionCut fillerwords orphrasesAdd asentenceRearrangethe orderofsentencesHighlightthe mainidea orthesisRearrangethe order ofparagraphsAdd morecontext toaparagraphReplacea vaguewordClarify aconfusingsentenceRemovesentencesthatdistractRemoverepetition(words)Swapout aclicheFill in aninformationgapFix arun-onsentenceReplaceasentenceRemove anunnecessarysentenceStrengthena sentenceAdd ahelpfuldetail intoa sentenceReplacea word foraccuracyRemoverepetition(sentences)Add atransitionphraseHighlightthe sowhat

A - R - R - R - Remix | Revising - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Replace passive with active voice
  2. Fix a sentence fragment
  3. Rephrase an awkward section
  4. Cut filler words or phrases
  5. Add a sentence
  6. Rearrange the order of sentences
  7. Highlight the main idea or thesis
  8. Rearrange the order of paragraphs
  9. Add more context to a paragraph
  10. Replace a vague word
  11. Clarify a confusing sentence
  12. Remove sentences that distract
  13. Remove repetition (words)
  14. Swap out a cliche
  15. Fill in an information gap
  16. Fix a run-on sentence
  17. Replace a sentence
  18. Remove an unnecessary sentence
  19. Strengthen a sentence
  20. Add a helpful detail into a sentence
  21. Replace a word for accuracy
  22. Remove repetition (sentences)
  23. Add a transition phrase
  24. Highlight the so what