No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Introduction- missingauthornameBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).MissingthesisstatementsMostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Introduction- missingauthornameBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).MissingthesisstatementsMostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  2. Introduction - missing author name
  3. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  4. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  5. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  6. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  7. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  8. Missing capital letters in text titles
  9. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  10. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  11. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  12. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  13. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  14. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  15. Missing thesis statements
  16. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.