MissingthesisstatementsIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceVague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Introduction- missingauthornameDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).MissingthesisstatementsIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceVague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Introduction- missingauthornameDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Missing thesis statements
  2. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  3. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  4. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  5. Missing capital letters in text titles
  6. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  7. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  8. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  9. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  10. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  11. Introduction - missing author name
  12. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  13. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  14. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  15. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  16. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).