Introduction- missingauthornameIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesNo technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.MissingthesisstatementsDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Introduction- missingauthornameIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesNo technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.MissingthesisstatementsDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Introduction - missing author name
  2. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  3. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  4. Missing capital letters in text titles
  5. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  6. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  7. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  8. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  9. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  10. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  11. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  12. Missing thesis statements
  13. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  14. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  15. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  16. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.