Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Missingcapitalletters intext titlesQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.MissingthesisstatementsBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Introduction- missingauthornameParagraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Missingcapitalletters intext titlesQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.MissingthesisstatementsBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Introduction- missingauthornameParagraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  2. Missing capital letters in text titles
  3. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  4. Missing thesis statements
  5. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  6. Introduction - missing author name
  7. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  8. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  9. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  10. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  11. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  12. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  13. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  14. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  15. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  16. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.