Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Introduction- missingauthornameQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.MissingthesisstatementsVague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Introduction- missingauthornameQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.MissingthesisstatementsVague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  2. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  3. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  4. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  5. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  6. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  7. Introduction - missing author name
  8. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  9. Missing thesis statements
  10. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  11. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  12. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  13. Missing capital letters in text titles
  14. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  15. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  16. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.