Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Introduction- missingauthornameBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.MissingthesisstatementsUsed firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Missingcapitalletters intext titlesStates that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceAnotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Introduction- missingauthornameBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.MissingthesisstatementsUsed firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Missingcapitalletters intext titlesStates that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceAnotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  2. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  3. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  4. Introduction - missing author name
  5. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  6. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  7. Missing thesis statements
  8. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  9. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  10. Missing capital letters in text titles
  11. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  12. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  13. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  14. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  15. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  16. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).