Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesParagraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceOnly quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.MissingthesisstatementsNo technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Introduction- missingauthornameIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesParagraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceOnly quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.MissingthesisstatementsNo technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Introduction- missingauthornameIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  2. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  3. Missing capital letters in text titles
  4. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  5. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  6. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  7. Missing thesis statements
  8. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  9. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  10. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  11. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  12. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  13. Introduction - missing author name
  14. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  15. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  16. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).