Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Introduction- missingauthornameMissingthesisstatementsDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceMissingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Introduction- missingauthornameMissingthesisstatementsDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceMissingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  2. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  3. Introduction - missing author name
  4. Missing thesis statements
  5. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  6. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  7. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  8. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  9. Missing capital letters in text titles
  10. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  11. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  12. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  13. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  14. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  15. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  16. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.