Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.MissingthesisstatementsParagraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Introduction- missingauthornameStates that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.MissingthesisstatementsParagraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Introduction- missingauthornameStates that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  2. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  3. Missing thesis statements
  4. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  5. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  6. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  7. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  8. Introduction - missing author name
  9. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  10. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  11. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  12. Missing capital letters in text titles
  13. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  14. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  15. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  16. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.