Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Introduction- missingauthornameMissingcapitalletters intext titlesBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.MissingthesisstatementsVague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Introduction- missingauthornameMissingcapitalletters intext titlesBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.MissingthesisstatementsVague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentence

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  2. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  3. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  4. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  5. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  6. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  7. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  8. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  9. Introduction - missing author name
  10. Missing capital letters in text titles
  11. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  12. Missing thesis statements
  13. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  14. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  15. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  16. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence