Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesMissingthesisstatementsIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Introduction- missingauthornameQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesMissingthesisstatementsIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Introduction- missingauthorname

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  2. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  3. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  4. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  5. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  6. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  7. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  8. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  9. Missing capital letters in text titles
  10. Missing thesis statements
  11. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  12. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  13. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  14. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  15. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  16. Introduction - missing author name