Missingcapitalletters intext titlesMissingthesisstatementsNo technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction- missingauthornameOnly quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesMissingthesisstatementsNo technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceIntroduction- missingauthornameOnly quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Missing capital letters in text titles
  2. Missing thesis statements
  3. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  4. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  5. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  6. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  7. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  8. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  9. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  10. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  11. Introduction - missing author name
  12. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  13. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  14. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  15. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  16. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.