Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction- missingauthornameQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.MissingthesisstatementsNo technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction- missingauthornameQuoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.MissingthesisstatementsNo technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  2. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  3. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  4. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  5. Missing capital letters in text titles
  6. Introduction - missing author name
  7. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  8. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  9. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  10. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  11. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  12. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  13. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  14. Missing thesis statements
  15. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  16. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.