Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesVague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.MissingthesisstatementsIntroduction- missingauthornameDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Anotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Used firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesVague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Introduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.Paragraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.MissingthesisstatementsIntroduction- missingauthorname

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  2. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  3. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  4. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  5. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  6. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  7. Missing capital letters in text titles
  8. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.
  9. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  10. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  11. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  12. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  13. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  14. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  15. Missing thesis statements
  16. Introduction - missing author name