Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).MissingthesisstatementsParagraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceUsed firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Introduction- missingauthornameAnotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.Introduction -missing singleinvertedcommas (mayhave useddouble).MissingthesisstatementsParagraphbegins with aquote - nothesis or topicsentenceUsed firstperson insteadof the reader,audience,responder etc.Only quoted thephoto essay -no analysis ofvisualelements.No technicallanguage/techniquesor a whole paragraphwithout it.Quoting thetext then justexplainingwhat thatquote shows.Introduction- missingauthornameAnotherexample...(addingevidence orideasrandomly).Did notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentence.Basic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,finally, inconclusion.States that'justice' isportrayed butnot WHATabout it.Mostly justdescribedimages, told thestory andexplainedquotes.Missingcapitalletters intext titlesIntroduction -missing form(novel +photo essay)Vague analysisthat providesno detail - thecolour evokesemotion.

'In Cold Blood' - Formative Task Bingo! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Introduction - missing single inverted commas (may have used double).
  2. Missing thesis statements
  3. Paragraph begins with a quote - no thesis or topic sentence
  4. Used first person instead of the reader, audience, responder etc.
  5. Only quoted the photo essay - no analysis of visual elements.
  6. No technical language/techniques or a whole paragraph without it.
  7. Quoting the text then just explaining what that quote shows.
  8. Introduction - missing author name
  9. Another example... (adding evidence or ideas randomly).
  10. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence.
  11. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion.
  12. States that 'justice' is portrayed but not WHAT about it.
  13. Mostly just described images, told the story and explained quotes.
  14. Missing capital letters in text titles
  15. Introduction - missing form (novel + photo essay)
  16. Vague analysis that provides no detail - the colour evokes emotion.