Delete "iswhen/where,"or "thereason is."(23e)All authors arereferred to by fullname the first timementioned and bylast namesubsequently.Add follow upto a quote thatconnectssource's idea toyour argument.Use cumulative orperiodic sentence,question,exclamation, orcommand.(27c-d)Titles are allcorrect(italicized or inquotationmarks). (34, 38)Addattributivetag before aquotation.(11c)Correctmixedmetaphor.(23b)Revisesentence toemphasizewords at end ofsentence. (26a)Correct mixedor mismatchedsentence parts.(23c-d)Deliberatelyrepeat wordtoemphasizeidea. (26c)Reorder ideasso they areleast to mostimportant.(26b)Fix "In thisarticle, it..." or"there are,""it is"constructions.(30a)Correct MLAcitation oralphabetizeworks citedpage (13).Correctconstruction.(23c)Create/correctparallelism inpaired orlisted ideas.(25)Revisesentenceopening.(27b)Completecomparisonsorintensifiers.(23g-h)Varysentencelength: longand short.(26e, 27a)All quotes arepunctuated (e.g.period aftercitation) andcited correctly.(34c)Add detailsto clarify andaddcredibility.(23a)Confirm everysource in theworks citedhas a matchingin-text citation.(13a)Addmissingword.(23f)Subordinateideaseffectively.(24a, c)Coordinateideaseffectively.(24b-c)Delete "iswhen/where,"or "thereason is."(23e)All authors arereferred to by fullname the first timementioned and bylast namesubsequently.Add follow upto a quote thatconnectssource's idea toyour argument.Use cumulative orperiodic sentence,question,exclamation, orcommand.(27c-d)Titles are allcorrect(italicized or inquotationmarks). (34, 38)Addattributivetag before aquotation.(11c)Correctmixedmetaphor.(23b)Revisesentence toemphasizewords at end ofsentence. (26a)Correct mixedor mismatchedsentence parts.(23c-d)Deliberatelyrepeat wordtoemphasizeidea. (26c)Reorder ideasso they areleast to mostimportant.(26b)Fix "In thisarticle, it..." or"there are,""it is"constructions.(30a)Correct MLAcitation oralphabetizeworks citedpage (13).Correctconstruction.(23c)Create/correctparallelism inpaired orlisted ideas.(25)Revisesentenceopening.(27b)Completecomparisonsorintensifiers.(23g-h)Varysentencelength: longand short.(26e, 27a)All quotes arepunctuated (e.g.period aftercitation) andcited correctly.(34c)Add detailsto clarify andaddcredibility.(23a)Confirm everysource in theworks citedhas a matchingin-text citation.(13a)Addmissingword.(23f)Subordinateideaseffectively.(24a, c)Coordinateideaseffectively.(24b-c)

Effective Sentences and MLA (HE) - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Delete "is when/where," or "the reason is." (23e)
  2. All authors are referred to by full name the first time mentioned and by last name subsequently.
  3. Add follow up to a quote that connects source's idea to your argument.
  4. Use cumulative or periodic sentence, question, exclamation, or command. (27c-d)
  5. Titles are all correct (italicized or in quotation marks). (34, 38)
  6. Add attributive tag before a quotation. (11c)
  7. Correct mixed metaphor. (23b)
  8. Revise sentence to emphasize words at end of sentence. (26a)
  9. Correct mixed or mismatched sentence parts. (23c-d)
  10. Deliberately repeat word to emphasize idea. (26c)
  11. Reorder ideas so they are least to most important. (26b)
  12. Fix "In this article, it..." or "there are," "it is" constructions. (30a)
  13. Correct MLA citation or alphabetize works cited page (13).
  14. Correct construction. (23c)
  15. Create/correct parallelism in paired or listed ideas. (25)
  16. Revise sentence opening. (27b)
  17. Complete comparisons or intensifiers. (23g-h)
  18. Vary sentence length: long and short. (26e, 27a)
  19. All quotes are punctuated (e.g. period after citation) and cited correctly. (34c)
  20. Add details to clarify and add credibility. (23a)
  21. Confirm every source in the works cited has a matching in-text citation. (13a)
  22. Add missing word. (23f)
  23. Subordinate ideas effectively.(24a, c)
  24. Coordinate ideas effectively. (24b-c)