The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.Missingan in-textcitation.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There are notransitionwords orphrases.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.Thereis nohook.There isnocounter-argument.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There aresentencefragments.There arerun-onsentences.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.Missingan in-textcitation.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There are notransitionwords orphrases.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.Thereis nohook.There isnocounter-argument.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There aresentencefragments.There arerun-onsentences.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  2. Missing an in-text citation.
  3. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  4. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  5. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  6. There are no transition words or phrases.
  7. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  8. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  9. There is no hook.
  10. There is no counter-argument.
  11. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  12. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  13. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  14. There are more than three misspelled words.
  15. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  16. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  17. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  18. The works cited page does not have a title.
  19. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  20. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  21. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  22. There are sentence fragments.
  23. There are run-on sentences.
  24. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.