You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.Missingan in-textcitation.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."Thereis nohook.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There isnocounter-argument.There arerun-onsentences.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.There aresentencefragments.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.Missingan in-textcitation.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."Thereis nohook.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There isnocounter-argument.There arerun-onsentences.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.There aresentencefragments.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  2. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  3. Missing an in-text citation.
  4. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  5. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  6. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  7. There are no transition words or phrases.
  8. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  9. There is no hook.
  10. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  11. There are more than three misspelled words.
  12. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  13. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  14. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  15. The works cited page does not have a title.
  16. There is no counter-argument.
  17. There are run-on sentences.
  18. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  19. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  20. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  21. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  22. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  23. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  24. There are sentence fragments.