You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There aresentencefragments.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.Missingan in-textcitation.There isnocounter-argument.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.Thereis nohook.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There arerun-onsentences.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There aresentencefragments.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.Missingan in-textcitation.There isnocounter-argument.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.Thereis nohook.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There arerun-onsentences.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  2. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  3. There are no transition words or phrases.
  4. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  5. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  6. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  7. There are sentence fragments.
  8. There are more than three misspelled words.
  9. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  10. Missing an in-text citation.
  11. There is no counter-argument.
  12. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  13. There is no hook.
  14. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  15. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  16. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  17. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  18. The works cited page does not have a title.
  19. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  20. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  21. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  22. There are run-on sentences.
  23. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  24. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."