There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Missingan in-textcitation.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.There aresentencefragments.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There isnocounter-argument.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There arerun-onsentences.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.Thereis nohook.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Missingan in-textcitation.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.There aresentencefragments.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There isnocounter-argument.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There arerun-onsentences.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.Thereis nohook.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  2. Missing an in-text citation.
  3. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  4. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  5. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  6. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  7. The works cited page does not have a title.
  8. There are more than three misspelled words.
  9. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  10. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  11. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  12. There are sentence fragments.
  13. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  14. There is no counter-argument.
  15. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  16. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  17. There are run-on sentences.
  18. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  19. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  20. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  21. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  22. There are no transition words or phrases.
  23. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  24. There is no hook.