Thereis nohook.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There are notransitionwords orphrases.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Missingan in-textcitation.There arerun-onsentences.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There aresentencefragments.There isnocounter-argument.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."Thereis nohook.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There are notransitionwords orphrases.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Missingan in-textcitation.There arerun-onsentences.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There aresentencefragments.There isnocounter-argument.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. There is no hook.
  2. There are more than three misspelled words.
  3. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  4. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  5. There are no transition words or phrases.
  6. The works cited page does not have a title.
  7. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  8. Missing an in-text citation.
  9. There are run-on sentences.
  10. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  11. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  12. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  13. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  14. There are sentence fragments.
  15. There is no counter-argument.
  16. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  17. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  18. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  19. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  20. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  21. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  22. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  23. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  24. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."