There arerun-onsentences.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There aresentencefragments.Missingan in-textcitation.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There isnocounter-argument.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.Thereis nohook.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There arerun-onsentences.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There aresentencefragments.Missingan in-textcitation.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There isnocounter-argument.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.Thereis nohook.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. There are run-on sentences.
  2. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  3. There are sentence fragments.
  4. Missing an in-text citation.
  5. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  6. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  7. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  8. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  9. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  10. The works cited page does not have a title.
  11. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  12. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  13. There are no transition words or phrases.
  14. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  15. There is no counter-argument.
  16. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  17. There are more than three misspelled words.
  18. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  19. There is no hook.
  20. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  21. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  22. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  23. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  24. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.