There isnocounter-argument.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There aresentencefragments.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You havetwo or morequotes in arow.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There arerun-onsentences.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.Missingan in-textcitation.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."Thereis nohook.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.There isnocounter-argument.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There aresentencefragments.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You havetwo or morequotes in arow.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There arerun-onsentences.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.Missingan in-textcitation.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."Thereis nohook.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. There is no counter-argument.
  2. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  3. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  4. There are sentence fragments.
  5. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  6. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  7. There are more than three misspelled words.
  8. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  9. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  10. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  11. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  12. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  13. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  14. There are run-on sentences.
  15. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  16. Missing an in-text citation.
  17. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  18. There is no hook.
  19. The works cited page does not have a title.
  20. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  21. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  22. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  23. There are no transition words or phrases.
  24. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.