You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.There are notransitionwords orphrases.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.There arerun-onsentences.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There isnocounter-argument.Thereis nohook.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."Missingan in-textcitation.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.There aresentencefragments.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.There are notransitionwords orphrases.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.There arerun-onsentences.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There isnocounter-argument.Thereis nohook.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."Missingan in-textcitation.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.There aresentencefragments.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  2. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  3. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  4. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  5. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  6. There are no transition words or phrases.
  7. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  8. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  9. There are more than three misspelled words.
  10. There are run-on sentences.
  11. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  12. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  13. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  14. The works cited page does not have a title.
  15. There is no counter-argument.
  16. There is no hook.
  17. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  18. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  19. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  20. Missing an in-text citation.
  21. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  22. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  23. There are sentence fragments.
  24. There are no quotation marks around quotes.