You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.There isnocounter-argument.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.Missingan in-textcitation.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.There aresentencefragments.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There are notransitionwords orphrases.There arerun-onsentences.Thereis nohook.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.There isnocounter-argument.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.Missingan in-textcitation.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.There aresentencefragments.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There are notransitionwords orphrases.There arerun-onsentences.Thereis nohook.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  2. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  3. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  4. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  5. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  6. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  7. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  8. There are more than three misspelled words.
  9. There is no counter-argument.
  10. The works cited page does not have a title.
  11. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  12. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  13. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  14. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  15. Missing an in-text citation.
  16. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  17. There are sentence fragments.
  18. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  19. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  20. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  21. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  22. There are no transition words or phrases.
  23. There are run-on sentences.
  24. There is no hook.