There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.Missingan in-textcitation.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Thereis nohook.There arerun-onsentences.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There aresentencefragments.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There isnocounter-argument.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.Missingan in-textcitation.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Thereis nohook.There arerun-onsentences.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There aresentencefragments.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There isnocounter-argument.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. There are more than three misspelled words.
  2. There are no transition words or phrases.
  3. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  4. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  5. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  6. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  7. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  8. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  9. Missing an in-text citation.
  10. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  11. There is no hook.
  12. There are run-on sentences.
  13. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  14. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  15. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  16. There are sentence fragments.
  17. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  18. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  19. The works cited page does not have a title.
  20. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  21. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  22. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  23. There is no counter-argument.
  24. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."