You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There isnocounter-argument.There aresentencefragments.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There arerun-onsentences.Missingan in-textcitation.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.Thereis nohook.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."There isnocounter-argument.There aresentencefragments.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There arerun-onsentences.Missingan in-textcitation.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.Thereis nohook.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  2. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  3. There is no counter-argument.
  4. There are sentence fragments.
  5. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  6. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  7. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  8. The works cited page does not have a title.
  9. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  10. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  11. There are no transition words or phrases.
  12. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  13. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  14. There are more than three misspelled words.
  15. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  16. There are run-on sentences.
  17. Missing an in-text citation.
  18. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  19. There is no hook.
  20. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  21. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  22. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  23. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  24. You have two or more quotes in a row.