Missingan in-textcitation.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.There isnocounter-argument.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There aresentencefragments.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.Thereis nohook.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There arerun-onsentences.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.Missingan in-textcitation.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.There isnocounter-argument.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There are notransitionwords orphrases.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There aresentencefragments.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.Thereis nohook.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There arerun-onsentences.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Missing an in-text citation.
  2. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  3. There is no counter-argument.
  4. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  5. There are no transition words or phrases.
  6. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  7. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  8. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  9. There are sentence fragments.
  10. There are more than three misspelled words.
  11. There is no hook.
  12. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  13. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  14. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  15. There are run-on sentences.
  16. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  17. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  18. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  19. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  20. The works cited page does not have a title.
  21. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  22. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  23. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  24. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.