You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There aresentencefragments.Thereis nohook.Missingan in-textcitation.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.There are notransitionwords orphrases.There isnocounter-argument.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There arerun-onsentences.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.There aresentencefragments.Thereis nohook.Missingan in-textcitation.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.There are notransitionwords orphrases.There isnocounter-argument.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There arerun-onsentences.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  2. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  3. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  4. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  5. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  6. There are sentence fragments.
  7. There is no hook.
  8. Missing an in-text citation.
  9. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  10. There are more than three misspelled words.
  11. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  12. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  13. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  14. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  15. There are no transition words or phrases.
  16. There is no counter-argument.
  17. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  18. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  19. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  20. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  21. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  22. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  23. There are run-on sentences.
  24. The works cited page does not have a title.