There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There arerun-onsentences.There aresentencefragments.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.Thereis nohook.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.Missingan in-textcitation.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.There are notransitionwords orphrases.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There isnocounter-argument.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There arerun-onsentences.There aresentencefragments.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.Thereis nohook.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.Missingan in-textcitation.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.There are notransitionwords orphrases.The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There isnocounter-argument.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. There are more than three misspelled words.
  2. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  3. There are run-on sentences.
  4. There are sentence fragments.
  5. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  6. There is no hook.
  7. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  8. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  9. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  10. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  11. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  12. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  13. Missing an in-text citation.
  14. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  15. There are no transition words or phrases.
  16. The works cited page does not have a title.
  17. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  18. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  19. You have two or more quotes in a row.
  20. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  21. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  22. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  23. There is no counter-argument.
  24. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.