There are notransitionwords orphrases.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Missingan in-textcitation.There arerun-onsentences.There aresentencefragments.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.Thereis nohook.There isnocounter-argument.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.There are notransitionwords orphrases.The backgroundsection of yourintroduction doesnot summarize thearticle.You have used"s" without anapostrophe (')to showpossession.There areless thanfoursentences ina paragraph.You have used'sto indicatea nounis plural.You have use aquote withoutexplaining whatit means or whyit is important.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "its" or "it's."There are noquotationmarksaroundquotes.There is asentencethat does notstart with acapital letter.Missingan in-textcitation.There arerun-onsentences.There aresentencefragments.You have notparaphrasedyour thesisstatement andtwo reasons inthe conclusion.You havemisspelled"Holocaust" ORyou have notcapitalized"Anne Frank."The workscited pagedoes nothave a title.Thesis statementdoes not state youropinion onthe Anne Frankcostume AND tworeasons why.You haveconfused thecorrect spellingof "there,""their," or"they're."There aremore thanthreemisspelledwords.Thereis nohook.There isnocounter-argument.Missing aquote from theNewsela articleabout the AnneFrank costume.You do not have ashortened title foryour in-text citationof the Anne FrankNewsela article.You do not starteach bodyparagraph witha topicsentence.You havetwo or morequotes in arow.

First Draft Bingo: Find the error, then fix it! - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. There are no transition words or phrases.
  2. The background section of your introduction does not summarize the article.
  3. You have used "s" without an apostrophe (') to show possession.
  4. There are less than four sentences in a paragraph.
  5. You have used 's to indicate a noun is plural.
  6. You have use a quote without explaining what it means or why it is important.
  7. You have confused the correct spelling of "its" or "it's."
  8. There are no quotation marks around quotes.
  9. There is a sentence that does not start with a capital letter.
  10. Missing an in-text citation.
  11. There are run-on sentences.
  12. There are sentence fragments.
  13. You have not paraphrased your thesis statement and two reasons in the conclusion.
  14. You have misspelled "Holocaust" OR you have not capitalized "Anne Frank."
  15. The works cited page does not have a title.
  16. Thesis statement does not state your opinion on the Anne Frank costume AND two reasons why.
  17. You have confused the correct spelling of "there," "their," or "they're."
  18. There are more than three misspelled words.
  19. There is no hook.
  20. There is no counter-argument.
  21. Missing a quote from the Newsela article about the Anne Frank costume.
  22. You do not have a shortened title for your in-text citation of the Anne Frank Newsela article.
  23. You do not start each body paragraph with a topic sentence.
  24. You have two or more quotes in a row.