Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToofamiliarBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.ToosubtleNotscaledfor flashTooheavy-handedI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutUnlikablecharactersI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.ToomuchplotI didn’tget itThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:NotenoughplotTooweirdNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Expand,expand,expandThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToofamiliarBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.ToosubtleNotscaledfor flashTooheavy-handedI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutUnlikablecharactersI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.ToomuchplotI didn’tget itThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:NotenoughplotTooweirdNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Expand,expand,expandThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  2. Too familiar
  3. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  4. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  5. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  6. Too subtle
  7. Not scaled for flash
  8. Too heavy-handed
  9. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  10. Unlikable characters
  11. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  12. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  13. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  14. Too much plot
  15. I didn’t get it
  16. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  17. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  18. Not enough plot
  19. Too weird
  20. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  21. Expand, expand, expand
  22. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  23. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  24. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10