Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)TooweirdYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10ToosubtleNotenoughplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10I didn’tget itHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToofamiliarToomuchplotCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCExpand,expand,expandUnlikablecharactersTooheavy-handedI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Notscaledfor flashNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)TooweirdYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10ToosubtleNotenoughplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10I didn’tget itHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToofamiliarToomuchplotCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCExpand,expand,expandUnlikablecharactersTooheavy-handedI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Notscaledfor flashNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  2. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  3. Too weird
  4. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  5. Too subtle
  6. Not enough plot
  7. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  8. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  9. I didn’t get it
  10. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  11. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  12. Too familiar
  13. Too much plot
  14. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  15. Expand, expand, expand
  16. Unlikable characters
  17. Too heavy-handed
  18. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  19. Not scaled for flash
  20. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  21. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  22. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  23. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  24. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.