TooweirdBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToofamiliarUnlikablecharactersNotscaledfor flashGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:ToosubtleThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10I didn’tget itDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)ToomuchplotTooheavy-handedNotenoughplotI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Expand,expand,expandNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10TooweirdBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToofamiliarUnlikablecharactersNotscaledfor flashGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:ToosubtleThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10I didn’tget itDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)ToomuchplotTooheavy-handedNotenoughplotI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Expand,expand,expandNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Too weird
  2. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  3. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  4. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  5. Too familiar
  6. Unlikable characters
  7. Not scaled for flash
  8. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  9. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  10. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  11. Too subtle
  12. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  13. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  14. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  15. I didn’t get it
  16. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  17. Too much plot
  18. Too heavy-handed
  19. Not enough plot
  20. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  21. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  22. Expand, expand, expand
  23. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  24. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10