I didn’tget itThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itTooweirdHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:ToofamiliarNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.ToomuchplotUnlikablecharactersNotscaledfor flashNotenoughplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)ToosubtleCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCExpand,expand,expandBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Tooheavy-handedDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)I didn’tget itThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itTooweirdHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:ToofamiliarNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.ToomuchplotUnlikablecharactersNotscaledfor flashNotenoughplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)ToosubtleCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCExpand,expand,expandBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Tooheavy-handedDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. I didn’t get it
  2. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  3. Too weird
  4. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  5. Too familiar
  6. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  7. Too much plot
  8. Unlikable characters
  9. Not scaled for flash
  10. Not enough plot
  11. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  12. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  13. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  14. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  15. Too subtle
  16. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  17. Expand, expand, expand
  18. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  19. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  20. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  21. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  22. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  23. Too heavy-handed
  24. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)