Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itNotscaledfor flashHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.NotenoughplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10ToosubtleDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)UnlikablecharactersHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToomuchplotExpand,expand,expandTooheavy-handedI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Not for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I didn’tget itI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCTooweirdToofamiliarBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itNotscaledfor flashHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.NotenoughplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10ToosubtleDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)UnlikablecharactersHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToomuchplotExpand,expand,expandTooheavy-handedI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Not for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I didn’tget itI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCTooweirdToofamiliar

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  2. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  3. Not scaled for flash
  4. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  5. Not enough plot
  6. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  7. Too subtle
  8. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  9. Unlikable characters
  10. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  11. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  12. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  13. Too much plot
  14. Expand, expand, expand
  15. Too heavy-handed
  16. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  17. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  18. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  19. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  20. I didn’t get it
  21. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  22. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  23. Too weird
  24. Too familiar