The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10UnlikablecharactersToofamiliarBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Expand,expand,expandI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Tooheavy-handedToomuchplotThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCTooweirdNotscaledfor flashI didn’tget itToosubtleNotenoughplotThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10UnlikablecharactersToofamiliarBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Expand,expand,expandI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Tooheavy-handedToomuchplotThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCTooweirdNotscaledfor flashI didn’tget itToosubtleNotenoughplot

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  2. Unlikable characters
  3. Too familiar
  4. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  5. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  6. Expand, expand, expand
  7. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  8. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  9. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  10. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  11. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  12. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  13. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  14. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  15. Too heavy-handed
  16. Too much plot
  17. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  18. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  19. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  20. Too weird
  21. Not scaled for flash
  22. I didn’t get it
  23. Too subtle
  24. Not enough plot