Notscaledfor flashHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10ToomuchplotNotenoughplotTooweirdI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Expand,expand,expandUnlikablecharactersBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itI didn’tget itToosubtleBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCTooheavy-handedToofamiliarNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutNotscaledfor flashHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10ToomuchplotNotenoughplotTooweirdI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Expand,expand,expandUnlikablecharactersBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itI didn’tget itToosubtleBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCTooheavy-handedToofamiliarNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isabout

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Not scaled for flash
  2. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  3. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  4. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  5. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  6. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  7. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  8. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  9. Too much plot
  10. Not enough plot
  11. Too weird
  12. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  13. Expand, expand, expand
  14. Unlikable characters
  15. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  16. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  17. I didn’t get it
  18. Too subtle
  19. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  20. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  21. Too heavy-handed
  22. Too familiar
  23. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  24. I don’t like what I decided this story is about