Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.ToomuchplotUnlikablecharactersExpand,expand,expandGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToosubtleHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.I didn’tget itTooheavy-handedNotenoughplotI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Not for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Notscaledfor flashToofamiliarTooweirdThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.ToomuchplotUnlikablecharactersExpand,expand,expandGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToosubtleHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.I didn’tget itTooheavy-handedNotenoughplotI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Not for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Notscaledfor flashToofamiliarTooweirdThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  2. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  3. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  4. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  5. Too much plot
  6. Unlikable characters
  7. Expand, expand, expand
  8. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  9. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  10. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  11. Too subtle
  12. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  13. I didn’t get it
  14. Too heavy-handed
  15. Not enough plot
  16. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  17. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  18. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  19. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  20. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  21. Not scaled for flash
  22. Too familiar
  23. Too weird
  24. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10