ToomuchplotNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:ToofamiliarThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10UnlikablecharactersBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Tooheavy-handedNotenoughplotYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCI didn’tget itNotscaledfor flashTooweirdHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.ToosubtleI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itExpand,expand,expandThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)ToomuchplotNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:ToofamiliarThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10UnlikablecharactersBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Tooheavy-handedNotenoughplotYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCI didn’tget itNotscaledfor flashTooweirdHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.ToosubtleI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itExpand,expand,expandThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Too much plot
  2. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  3. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  4. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  5. Too familiar
  6. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  7. Unlikable characters
  8. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  9. Too heavy-handed
  10. Not enough plot
  11. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  12. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  13. I didn’t get it
  14. Not scaled for flash
  15. Too weird
  16. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  17. Too subtle
  18. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  19. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  20. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  21. Expand, expand, expand
  22. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  23. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  24. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)