Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Expand,expand,expandNotenoughplotHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutNotscaledfor flashNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itToosubtleThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10ToofamiliarI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)I didn’tget itTooheavy-handedDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)UnlikablecharactersTooweirdCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToomuchplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Expand,expand,expandNotenoughplotHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutNotscaledfor flashNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itToosubtleThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10ToofamiliarI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)I didn’tget itTooheavy-handedDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)UnlikablecharactersTooweirdCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToomuchplot

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  2. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  3. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  4. Expand, expand, expand
  5. Not enough plot
  6. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  7. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  8. Not scaled for flash
  9. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  10. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  11. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  12. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  13. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  14. Too subtle
  15. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  16. Too familiar
  17. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  18. I didn’t get it
  19. Too heavy-handed
  20. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  21. Unlikable characters
  22. Too weird
  23. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  24. Too much plot