You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutExpand,expand,expandThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10UnlikablecharactersToofamiliarToosubtleTooheavy-handedThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Not for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Notscaledfor flashI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)ToomuchplotTooweirdDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)I didn’tget itNotenoughplotYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutExpand,expand,expandThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10UnlikablecharactersToofamiliarToosubtleTooheavy-handedThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Not for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Notscaledfor flashI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)ToomuchplotTooweirdDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)I didn’tget itNotenoughplot

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  2. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  3. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  4. Expand, expand, expand
  5. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  6. Unlikable characters
  7. Too familiar
  8. Too subtle
  9. Too heavy-handed
  10. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  11. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  12. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  13. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  14. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  15. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  16. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  17. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  18. Not scaled for flash
  19. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  20. Too much plot
  21. Too weird
  22. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  23. I didn’t get it
  24. Not enough plot