You reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10ToomuchplotNotscaledfor flashExpand,expand,expandNotenoughplotCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCTooheavy-handedTooweirdBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itUnlikablecharactersNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:I didn’tget itI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutToofamiliarI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10ToosubtleYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10ToomuchplotNotscaledfor flashExpand,expand,expandNotenoughplotCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCTooheavy-handedTooweirdBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itUnlikablecharactersNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:I didn’tget itI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutToofamiliarI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Toosubtle

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  2. Too much plot
  3. Not scaled for flash
  4. Expand, expand, expand
  5. Not enough plot
  6. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  7. Too heavy-handed
  8. Too weird
  9. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  10. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  11. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  12. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  13. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  14. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  15. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  16. Unlikable characters
  17. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  18. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  19. I didn’t get it
  20. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  21. Too familiar
  22. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  23. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  24. Too subtle