I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10ToosubtleHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:TooweirdNotscaledfor flashThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToofamiliarToomuchplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Tooheavy-handedExpand,expand,expandHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.I didn’tget itNotenoughplotUnlikablecharactersNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10ToosubtleHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:TooweirdNotscaledfor flashThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToofamiliarToomuchplotGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Tooheavy-handedExpand,expand,expandHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.I didn’tget itNotenoughplotUnlikablecharactersNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  2. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  3. Too subtle
  4. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  5. Too weird
  6. Not scaled for flash
  7. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  8. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  9. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  10. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  11. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  12. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  13. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  14. Too familiar
  15. Too much plot
  16. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  17. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  18. Too heavy-handed
  19. Expand, expand, expand
  20. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  21. I didn’t get it
  22. Not enough plot
  23. Unlikable characters
  24. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.