TooweirdNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Expand,expand,expandThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I didn’tget itUnlikablecharactersNotenoughplotToosubtleI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Tooheavy-handedHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToofamiliarBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10ToomuchplotHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Notscaledfor flashCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)TooweirdNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Expand,expand,expandThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I didn’tget itUnlikablecharactersNotenoughplotToosubtleI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Tooheavy-handedHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToofamiliarBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10ToomuchplotHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Notscaledfor flashCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Too weird
  2. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  3. Expand, expand, expand
  4. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  5. I didn’t get it
  6. Unlikable characters
  7. Not enough plot
  8. Too subtle
  9. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  10. Too heavy-handed
  11. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  12. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  13. Too familiar
  14. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  15. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  16. Too much plot
  17. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  18. Not scaled for flash
  19. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  20. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  21. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  22. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  23. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  24. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)