The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToomuchplotDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10ToosubtleHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.UnlikablecharactersHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Tooheavy-handedThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Notscaledfor flashTooweirdNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itExpand,expand,expandI didn’tget itCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToofamiliarNotenoughplotYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToomuchplotDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10ToosubtleHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.UnlikablecharactersHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Tooheavy-handedThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Based on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Notscaledfor flashTooweirdNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itExpand,expand,expandI didn’tget itCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCToofamiliarNotenoughplotYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  2. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  3. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  4. Too much plot
  5. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  6. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  7. Too subtle
  8. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  9. Unlikable characters
  10. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  11. Too heavy-handed
  12. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  13. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  14. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  15. Not scaled for flash
  16. Too weird
  17. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  18. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  19. Expand, expand, expand
  20. I didn’t get it
  21. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  22. Too familiar
  23. Not enough plot
  24. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10