Here’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Notscaledfor flashToomuchplotNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I didn’tget itThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Tooheavy-handedYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10ToosubtleExpand,expand,expandNotenoughplotTooweirdI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutUnlikablecharactersBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10ToofamiliarHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10Notscaledfor flashToomuchplotNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.I didn’tget itThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Tooheavy-handedYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10ToosubtleExpand,expand,expandNotenoughplotTooweirdI loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutUnlikablecharactersBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Didn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Toofamiliar

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  2. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  3. Not scaled for flash
  4. Too much plot
  5. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  6. I didn’t get it
  7. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  8. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  9. Too heavy-handed
  10. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  11. Too subtle
  12. Expand, expand, expand
  13. Not enough plot
  14. Too weird
  15. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  16. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  17. Unlikable characters
  18. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  19. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  20. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  21. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  22. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  23. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  24. Too familiar