ToosubtleToomuchplotBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Notscaledfor flashTooweirdYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutUnlikablecharactersTooheavy-handedHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Not for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.ToofamiliarExpand,expand,expandThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10I didn’tget itGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:NotenoughplotThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itToosubtleToomuchplotBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.Notscaledfor flashTooweirdYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10Commenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)I don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutUnlikablecharactersTooheavy-handedHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.Not for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.ToofamiliarExpand,expand,expandThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10I didn’tget itGreat worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10Beautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10Here’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:NotenoughplotThat was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated it

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Too subtle
  2. Too much plot
  3. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  4. Not scaled for flash
  5. Too weird
  6. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  7. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  8. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  9. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  10. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  11. Unlikable characters
  12. Too heavy-handed
  13. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  14. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  15. Too familiar
  16. Expand, expand, expand
  17. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  18. I didn’t get it
  19. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10
  20. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  21. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  22. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  23. Not enough plot
  24. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it