I didn’tget itBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Notscaledfor flashNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Tooheavy-handedYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Expand,expand,expandI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10TooweirdToofamiliarDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)UnlikablecharactersNotenoughplotCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.ToosubtleToomuchplotBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10I didn’tget itBased on the title oropening paragraph, Ithought this storywas going to beabout somethingelse, and then I wasdisappointed itwasn’t.The storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 1/10I loved this, andcan’t think of asingle thing toimprove. (Luckilythe other 19critiquers stronglydisagree.)Notscaledfor flashNot for me. Iwill take noadditionalquestions atthis time.Tooheavy-handedYou reallywent forsomethinghere.Respect. 3/10That was aninterestingchoice youmade; Ihated itHere’s what Iwould havedoneinstead:Expand,expand,expandI don’t likewhat Idecided thisstory isaboutThe storymade me feelthings I wasn’texpecting tofeel. 10/10TooweirdToofamiliarDidn’t love thestory, but greattitle. (Onlyeligible onrummage titleweek)UnlikablecharactersNotenoughplotCommenter 1: I lovedthis story for A, B ,and C. Commenter 2: I didn’tlike this storybecause of A, B, andCHere’s 1vague thing Iliked and 10specific thingsI hated.ToosubtleToomuchplotBeautifulwriting;lovelydetails. 4/10Great worldbuilding. Ihate worldbuilding.3/10

WW Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. I didn’t get it
  2. Based on the title or opening paragraph, I thought this story was going to be about something else, and then I was disappointed it wasn’t.
  3. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 1/10
  4. I loved this, and can’t think of a single thing to improve. (Luckily the other 19 critiquers strongly disagree.)
  5. Not scaled for flash
  6. Not for me. I will take no additional questions at this time.
  7. Too heavy-handed
  8. You really went for something here. Respect. 3/10
  9. That was an interesting choice you made; I hated it
  10. Here’s what I would have done instead:
  11. Expand, expand, expand
  12. I don’t like what I decided this story is about
  13. The story made me feel things I wasn’t expecting to feel. 10/10
  14. Too weird
  15. Too familiar
  16. Didn’t love the story, but great title. (Only eligible on rummage title week)
  17. Unlikable characters
  18. Not enough plot
  19. Commenter 1: I loved this story for A, B , and C. Commenter 2: I didn’t like this story because of A, B, and C
  20. Here’s 1 vague thing I liked and 10 specific things I hated.
  21. Too subtle
  22. Too much plot
  23. Beautiful writing; lovely details. 4/10
  24. Great world building. I hate world building. 3/10