"Consideromitting""pleasedefinepronoun""citeneeded"BizarremetaphorAcronymneverdefinedIrrelevantpersonalanecdoteNo topicsentencefor pagesConcedesthat exampleis onlytangentiallyrelated"revise forconcisionandclarity"Paragraphthat could bedistilled intoa singlesentence"pleasedefinethis term"ad hominemattack onotherauthors"eliminatepassivevoice"Block quotelonger thanthreeparagraphsoutdatedpopculturereferencepincitemissingcommaspliceMissingword"Considerprovidingexamples"(no punintended)"This wordappears multipletimes in onesentence; pleasevary word choice.""shorten ordivide intotwosentences""Ithink"emoji intext orfootnote"Consideromitting""pleasedefinepronoun""citeneeded"BizarremetaphorAcronymneverdefinedIrrelevantpersonalanecdoteNo topicsentencefor pagesConcedesthat exampleis onlytangentiallyrelated"revise forconcisionandclarity"Paragraphthat could bedistilled intoa singlesentence"pleasedefinethis term"ad hominemattack onotherauthors"eliminatepassivevoice"Block quotelonger thanthreeparagraphsoutdatedpopculturereferencepincitemissingcommaspliceMissingword"Considerprovidingexamples"(no punintended)"This wordappears multipletimes in onesentence; pleasevary word choice.""shorten ordivide intotwosentences""Ithink"emoji intext orfootnote

Substantive Edit Memo Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. "Consider omitting"
  2. "please define pronoun"
  3. "cite needed"
  4. Bizarre metaphor
  5. Acronym never defined
  6. Irrelevant personal anecdote
  7. No topic sentence for pages
  8. Concedes that example is only tangentially related
  9. "revise for concision and clarity"
  10. Paragraph that could be distilled into a single sentence
  11. "please define this term"
  12. ad hominem attack on other authors
  13. "eliminate passive voice"
  14. Block quote longer than three paragraphs
  15. outdated pop culture reference
  16. pincite missing
  17. comma splice
  18. Missing word
  19. "Consider providing examples"
  20. (no pun intended)
  21. "This word appears multiple times in one sentence; please vary word choice."
  22. "shorten or divide into two sentences"
  23. "I think"
  24. emoji in text or footnote