Missing thesisstatements atthe beginningof paragraphsDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentenceIntroduction -missing singleinverted commasfrom text title(may have useddouble)No technicallanguage(techniques) ora wholeparagraphwithout itListed specifictechniques intheintroduction]or conclusionIntroduction -no mention ofcontext (smallworking classtown of Durhamin the 1980's)Short conclusion- did not restatetitle, author, form,main thesis andoverview of threemain pointsSaid'emotionsand qualities'but notWHAT'Shows'Thistechniqueshows...Missingcapital lettersin text title orcharacternamesSaid'experiences'but notWHATNo link tothe questionat the end ofa paragraphBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,in conclusionIntroduction -missing form(film) ORyou said'movie'No mention ofthe responderor Daldry OR awholeparagraphwithout itIntroduction- missingcomposername'Uses/used'Thecomposeruses...Naming atechnique andjust saying whatit 'shows' -withoutexplaining HOWNo textualevidence (quoteor analysis ofscene) or awhole paragraphwith out itNamed scenesrather thanexplaining themoment in the filmto contextualiseanalysisNaming athematic concern(search foridentity etc.) orconcept but notWHAT ABOUT ITAnotherexample/scene(adding orlisting ideasrandomly)Used firstperson insteadof theresponder,audience,individuals etc.Introduction -missing genre(bildungsroman)Missing thesisstatements atthe beginningof paragraphsDid notintroducequote - justused it to starta sentenceIntroduction -missing singleinverted commasfrom text title(may have useddouble)No technicallanguage(techniques) ora wholeparagraphwithout itListed specifictechniques intheintroduction]or conclusionIntroduction -no mention ofcontext (smallworking classtown of Durhamin the 1980's)Short conclusion- did not restatetitle, author, form,main thesis andoverview of threemain pointsSaid'emotionsand qualities'but notWHAT'Shows'Thistechniqueshows...Missingcapital lettersin text title orcharacternamesSaid'experiences'but notWHATNo link tothe questionat the end ofa paragraphBasic transitionstatements -firstly, secondly,in conclusionIntroduction -missing form(film) ORyou said'movie'No mention ofthe responderor Daldry OR awholeparagraphwithout itIntroduction- missingcomposername'Uses/used'Thecomposeruses...Naming atechnique andjust saying whatit 'shows' -withoutexplaining HOWNo textualevidence (quoteor analysis ofscene) or awhole paragraphwith out itNamed scenesrather thanexplaining themoment in the filmto contextualiseanalysisNaming athematic concern(search foridentity etc.) orconcept but notWHAT ABOUT ITAnotherexample/scene(adding orlisting ideasrandomly)Used firstperson insteadof theresponder,audience,individuals etc.Introduction -missing genre(bildungsroman)

Common Mod - Texts and Human Experiences - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Missing thesis statements at the beginning of paragraphs
  2. Did not introduce quote - just used it to start a sentence
  3. Introduction - missing single inverted commas from text title (may have used double)
  4. No technical language (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  5. Listed specific techniques in the introduction ]or conclusion
  6. Introduction - no mention of context (small working class town of Durham in the 1980's)
  7. Short conclusion - did not restate title, author, form, main thesis and overview of three main points
  8. Said 'emotions and qualities' but not WHAT
  9. 'Shows' This technique shows...
  10. Missing capital letters in text title or character names
  11. Said 'experiences' but not WHAT
  12. No link to the question at the end of a paragraph
  13. Basic transition statements - firstly, secondly, in conclusion
  14. Introduction - missing form (film) OR you said 'movie'
  15. No mention of the responder or Daldry OR a whole paragraph without it
  16. Introduction - missing composer name
  17. 'Uses/used' The composer uses...
  18. Naming a technique and just saying what it 'shows' - without explaining HOW
  19. No textual evidence (quote or analysis of scene) or a whole paragraph with out it
  20. Named scenes rather than explaining the moment in the film to contextualise analysis
  21. Naming a thematic concern (search for identity etc.) or concept but not WHAT ABOUT IT
  22. Another example/scene (adding or listing ideas randomly)
  23. Used first person instead of the responder, audience, individuals etc.
  24. Introduction - missing genre (bildungsroman)