Introduction -did notinclude fullcomposernameIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Missingcapitalletters intext/s titleIntroduction- no textualform (novel,poetry, film)No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout it'Uses' -thecomposeruses...No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itConclusion -did notrestate/provideoverview ofthree mainpointsNamed aconcept butnot whatABOUT it isconveyedProvided atechnique andjust said what it'shows' but notHOW (notexplained)Conclusion- does notbegin witha thesisUsed firstperson insteadof theresponder,reader, vieweror audience'Shows' -this simileshowsIntroduction- listedspecifictechniquesIntroduction- nocomposerpurposeIntroduction -did not provideoverview ofthree mainpoints'Theme' -the themeof lossDoes notintroducequotes - "this isillustrated/exemplified as____ states..."Introduction- no thesisstatementNo clearstructure (intro,3-5 paragraphsand conclusion)Vague - showswhat theexperience islike/conveysemotion etc.Topic sentencesmissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, notcomposer or ideasIntroduction -title notunderlined orin 'invertedcommas' Introduction- listedtopicsIntroduction -did notinclude fullcomposernameIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Missingcapitalletters intext/s titleIntroduction- no textualform (novel,poetry, film)No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout it'Uses' -thecomposeruses...No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itConclusion -did notrestate/provideoverview ofthree mainpointsNamed aconcept butnot whatABOUT it isconveyedProvided atechnique andjust said what it'shows' but notHOW (notexplained)Conclusion- does notbegin witha thesisUsed firstperson insteadof theresponder,reader, vieweror audience'Shows' -this simileshowsIntroduction- listedspecifictechniquesIntroduction- nocomposerpurposeIntroduction -did not provideoverview ofthree mainpoints'Theme' -the themeof lossDoes notintroducequotes - "this isillustrated/exemplified as____ states..."Introduction- no thesisstatementNo clearstructure (intro,3-5 paragraphsand conclusion)Vague - showswhat theexperience islike/conveysemotion etc.Topic sentencesmissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, notcomposer or ideasIntroduction -title notunderlined orin 'invertedcommas' Introduction- listedtopics

Bad English Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Introduction - did not include full composer name
  2. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  3. Missing capital letters in text/s title
  4. Introduction - no textual form (novel, poetry, film)
  5. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  6. 'Uses' - the composer uses...
  7. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  8. Conclusion - did not restate/provide overview of three main points
  9. Named a concept but not what ABOUT it is conveyed
  10. Provided a technique and just said what it 'shows' but not HOW (not explained)
  11. Conclusion - does not begin with a thesis
  12. Used first person instead of the responder, reader, viewer or audience
  13. 'Shows' - this simile shows
  14. Introduction - listed specific techniques
  15. Introduction - no composer purpose
  16. Introduction - did not provide overview of three main points
  17. 'Theme' - the theme of loss
  18. Does not introduce quotes - "this is illustrated/ exemplified as ____ states..."
  19. Introduction - no thesis statement
  20. No clear structure (intro, 3-5 paragraphs and conclusion)
  21. Vague - shows what the experience is like/conveys emotion etc.
  22. Topic sentences missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not composer or ideas
  23. Introduction - title not underlined or in 'inverted commas'
  24. Introduction - listed topics