'Shows' -this simileshowsIntroduction- nocomposerpurposeUsed firstperson insteadof theresponder,reader, vieweror audienceNo analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itNo clearstructure (intro,3-5 paragraphsand conclusion)'Theme' -the themeof lossIntroduction- listedspecifictechniques'Uses' -thecomposeruses...Introduction -did notinclude fullcomposernameNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itIntroduction- no thesisstatementConclusion -did notrestate/provideoverview ofthree mainpointsIntroduction -did not provideoverview ofthree mainpointsNamed aconcept butnot whatABOUT it isconveyedIntroduction -title notunderlined orin 'invertedcommas' Vague - showswhat theexperience islike/conveysemotion etc.Conclusion- does notbegin witha thesisTopic sentencesmissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, notcomposer or ideasDoes notintroducequotes - "this isillustrated/exemplified as____ states..."Provided atechnique andjust said what it'shows' but notHOW (notexplained)Introduction- listedtopicsMissingcapitalletters intext/s titleIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Introduction- no textualform (novel,poetry, film)'Shows' -this simileshowsIntroduction- nocomposerpurposeUsed firstperson insteadof theresponder,reader, vieweror audienceNo analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itNo clearstructure (intro,3-5 paragraphsand conclusion)'Theme' -the themeof lossIntroduction- listedspecifictechniques'Uses' -thecomposeruses...Introduction -did notinclude fullcomposernameNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itIntroduction- no thesisstatementConclusion -did notrestate/provideoverview ofthree mainpointsIntroduction -did not provideoverview ofthree mainpointsNamed aconcept butnot whatABOUT it isconveyedIntroduction -title notunderlined orin 'invertedcommas' Vague - showswhat theexperience islike/conveysemotion etc.Conclusion- does notbegin witha thesisTopic sentencesmissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, notcomposer or ideasDoes notintroducequotes - "this isillustrated/exemplified as____ states..."Provided atechnique andjust said what it'shows' but notHOW (notexplained)Introduction- listedtopicsMissingcapitalletters intext/s titleIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Introduction- no textualform (novel,poetry, film)

Bad English Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. 'Shows' - this simile shows
  2. Introduction - no composer purpose
  3. Used first person instead of the responder, reader, viewer or audience
  4. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  5. No clear structure (intro, 3-5 paragraphs and conclusion)
  6. 'Theme' - the theme of loss
  7. Introduction - listed specific techniques
  8. 'Uses' - the composer uses...
  9. Introduction - did not include full composer name
  10. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  11. Introduction - no thesis statement
  12. Conclusion - did not restate/provide overview of three main points
  13. Introduction - did not provide overview of three main points
  14. Named a concept but not what ABOUT it is conveyed
  15. Introduction - title not underlined or in 'inverted commas'
  16. Vague - shows what the experience is like/conveys emotion etc.
  17. Conclusion - does not begin with a thesis
  18. Topic sentences missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not composer or ideas
  19. Does not introduce quotes - "this is illustrated/ exemplified as ____ states..."
  20. Provided a technique and just said what it 'shows' but not HOW (not explained)
  21. Introduction - listed topics
  22. Missing capital letters in text/s title
  23. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  24. Introduction - no textual form (novel, poetry, film)