Topic sentencesmissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, notcomposer or ideasUsed firstperson insteadof theresponder,reader, vieweror audienceIntroduction- listedtopicsIntroduction -did notinclude fullcomposernameIntroduction -title notunderlined orin 'invertedcommas' Introduction- no thesisstatementDoes notintroducequotes - "this isillustrated/exemplified as____ states..."Provided atechnique andjust said what it'shows' but notHOW (notexplained)Named aconcept butnot whatABOUT it isconveyedVague - showswhat theexperience islike/conveysemotion etc.Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)No clearstructure (intro,3-5 paragraphsand conclusion)Introduction- no textualform (novel,poetry, film)'Theme' -the themeof lossNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNo analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itIntroduction -did not provideoverview ofthree mainpoints'Shows' -this simileshowsIntroduction- listedspecifictechniquesIntroduction- nocomposerpurposeConclusion -did notrestate/provideoverview ofthree mainpointsConclusion- does notbegin witha thesis'Uses' -thecomposeruses...Missingcapitalletters intext/s titleTopic sentencesmissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, notcomposer or ideasUsed firstperson insteadof theresponder,reader, vieweror audienceIntroduction- listedtopicsIntroduction -did notinclude fullcomposernameIntroduction -title notunderlined orin 'invertedcommas' Introduction- no thesisstatementDoes notintroducequotes - "this isillustrated/exemplified as____ states..."Provided atechnique andjust said what it'shows' but notHOW (notexplained)Named aconcept butnot whatABOUT it isconveyedVague - showswhat theexperience islike/conveysemotion etc.Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)No clearstructure (intro,3-5 paragraphsand conclusion)Introduction- no textualform (novel,poetry, film)'Theme' -the themeof lossNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNo analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itIntroduction -did not provideoverview ofthree mainpoints'Shows' -this simileshowsIntroduction- listedspecifictechniquesIntroduction- nocomposerpurposeConclusion -did notrestate/provideoverview ofthree mainpointsConclusion- does notbegin witha thesis'Uses' -thecomposeruses...Missingcapitalletters intext/s title

Bad English Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Topic sentences missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not composer or ideas
  2. Used first person instead of the responder, reader, viewer or audience
  3. Introduction - listed topics
  4. Introduction - did not include full composer name
  5. Introduction - title not underlined or in 'inverted commas'
  6. Introduction - no thesis statement
  7. Does not introduce quotes - "this is illustrated/ exemplified as ____ states..."
  8. Provided a technique and just said what it 'shows' but not HOW (not explained)
  9. Named a concept but not what ABOUT it is conveyed
  10. Vague - shows what the experience is like/conveys emotion etc.
  11. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  12. No clear structure (intro, 3-5 paragraphs and conclusion)
  13. Introduction - no textual form (novel, poetry, film)
  14. 'Theme' - the theme of loss
  15. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  16. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  17. Introduction - did not provide overview of three main points
  18. 'Shows' - this simile shows
  19. Introduction - listed specific techniques
  20. Introduction - no composer purpose
  21. Conclusion - did not restate/provide overview of three main points
  22. Conclusion - does not begin with a thesis
  23. 'Uses' - the composer uses...
  24. Missing capital letters in text/s title