Introduction- listedspecifictechniquesUsed firstperson insteadof theresponder,reader, vieweror audienceIntroduction- no thesisstatementIntroduction -title notunderlined orin 'invertedcommas' No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itProvided atechnique andjust said what it'shows' but notHOW (notexplained)'Shows' -this simileshowsIntroduction- listedtopicsConclusion- does notbegin witha thesisNamed aconcept butnot whatABOUT it isconveyedDoes notintroducequotes - "this isillustrated/exemplified as____ states..."Introduction- no textualform (novel,poetry, film)No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itIntroduction -did not provideoverview ofthree mainpoints'Theme' -the themeof lossVague - showswhat theexperience islike/conveysemotion etc.'Uses' -thecomposeruses...Introduction- nocomposerpurposeTopic sentencesmissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, notcomposer or ideasMissingcapitalletters intext/s titleIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Conclusion -did notrestate/provideoverview ofthree mainpointsNo clearstructure (intro,3-5 paragraphsand conclusion)Introduction -did notinclude fullcomposernameIntroduction- listedspecifictechniquesUsed firstperson insteadof theresponder,reader, vieweror audienceIntroduction- no thesisstatementIntroduction -title notunderlined orin 'invertedcommas' No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itProvided atechnique andjust said what it'shows' but notHOW (notexplained)'Shows' -this simileshowsIntroduction- listedtopicsConclusion- does notbegin witha thesisNamed aconcept butnot whatABOUT it isconveyedDoes notintroducequotes - "this isillustrated/exemplified as____ states..."Introduction- no textualform (novel,poetry, film)No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itIntroduction -did not provideoverview ofthree mainpoints'Theme' -the themeof lossVague - showswhat theexperience islike/conveysemotion etc.'Uses' -thecomposeruses...Introduction- nocomposerpurposeTopic sentencesmissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, notcomposer or ideasMissingcapitalletters intext/s titleIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Conclusion -did notrestate/provideoverview ofthree mainpointsNo clearstructure (intro,3-5 paragraphsand conclusion)Introduction -did notinclude fullcomposername

Bad English Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Introduction - listed specific techniques
  2. Used first person instead of the responder, reader, viewer or audience
  3. Introduction - no thesis statement
  4. Introduction - title not underlined or in 'inverted commas'
  5. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  6. Provided a technique and just said what it 'shows' but not HOW (not explained)
  7. 'Shows' - this simile shows
  8. Introduction - listed topics
  9. Conclusion - does not begin with a thesis
  10. Named a concept but not what ABOUT it is conveyed
  11. Does not introduce quotes - "this is illustrated/ exemplified as ____ states..."
  12. Introduction - no textual form (novel, poetry, film)
  13. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  14. Introduction - did not provide overview of three main points
  15. 'Theme' - the theme of loss
  16. Vague - shows what the experience is like/conveys emotion etc.
  17. 'Uses' - the composer uses...
  18. Introduction - no composer purpose
  19. Topic sentences missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not composer or ideas
  20. Missing capital letters in text/s title
  21. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  22. Conclusion - did not restate/provide overview of three main points
  23. No clear structure (intro, 3-5 paragraphs and conclusion)
  24. Introduction - did not include full composer name