Add atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphImproveyour topicsentenceReplacerepetitivewordsReviseyourthesisstatementFix afragmentVary yoursentencelengthAdd astrongerhookRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceCorrect acommamistakeExplainthe impactof serviceAdd aquotationEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionCombinetwosentencesCorrect aspellingmistakeAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Replacea weakverbRestateyour thesisin theconclusionAdd aspecificexampleFix arun-onsentenceAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphImproveyour topicsentenceReplacerepetitivewordsReviseyourthesisstatementFix afragmentVary yoursentencelengthAdd astrongerhookRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceCorrect acommamistakeExplainthe impactof serviceAdd aquotationEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionCombinetwosentencesCorrect aspellingmistakeAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Replacea weakverbRestateyour thesisin theconclusionAdd aspecificexampleFix arun-onsentence

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  2. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  3. Improve your topic sentence
  4. Replace repetitive words
  5. Revise your thesis statement
  6. Fix a fragment
  7. Vary your sentence length
  8. Add a stronger hook
  9. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  10. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  11. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  12. Describe a veteran's act of service
  13. Correct a comma mistake
  14. Explain the impact of service
  15. Add a quotation
  16. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  17. Combine two sentences
  18. Correct a spelling mistake
  19. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  20. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  21. Replace a weak verb
  22. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  23. Add a specific example
  24. Fix a run-on sentence