Improveyour topicsentenceInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Describe aveteran'sact ofserviceVary yoursentencelengthReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsCorrect aspellingmistakeCombinetwosentencesEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionAdd aspecificexampleAdd aquotationReplacerepetitivewordsFix arun-onsentenceRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityReplacea weakverbAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphAdd astrongerhookExplainthe impactof serviceHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesReviseyourthesisstatementFix afragmentCorrect acommamistakeRestateyour thesisin theconclusionAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsImproveyour topicsentenceInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Describe aveteran'sact ofserviceVary yoursentencelengthReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsCorrect aspellingmistakeCombinetwosentencesEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionAdd aspecificexampleAdd aquotationReplacerepetitivewordsFix arun-onsentenceRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityReplacea weakverbAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphAdd astrongerhookExplainthe impactof serviceHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesReviseyourthesisstatementFix afragmentCorrect acommamistakeRestateyour thesisin theconclusionAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphs

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Improve your topic sentence
  2. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  3. Describe a veteran's act of service
  4. Vary your sentence length
  5. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  6. Correct a spelling mistake
  7. Combine two sentences
  8. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  9. Add a specific example
  10. Add a quotation
  11. Replace repetitive words
  12. Fix a run-on sentence
  13. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  14. Replace a weak verb
  15. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  16. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  17. Add a stronger hook
  18. Explain the impact of service
  19. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  20. Revise your thesis statement
  21. Fix a fragment
  22. Correct a comma mistake
  23. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  24. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs