Fix afragmentVary yoursentencelengthExplainthe impactof serviceHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesCorrect acommamistakeRestateyour thesisin theconclusionImproveyour topicsentenceAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionCorrect aspellingmistakeFix arun-onsentenceDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Revise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd aspecificexampleReplacerepetitivewordsReviseyourthesisstatementCombinetwosentencesAdd astrongerhookAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsReplacea weakverbAdd aquotationStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphFix afragmentVary yoursentencelengthExplainthe impactof serviceHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesCorrect acommamistakeRestateyour thesisin theconclusionImproveyour topicsentenceAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionCorrect aspellingmistakeFix arun-onsentenceDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Revise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd aspecificexampleReplacerepetitivewordsReviseyourthesisstatementCombinetwosentencesAdd astrongerhookAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsReplacea weakverbAdd aquotationStrengthenyourconclusionparagraph

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Fix a fragment
  2. Vary your sentence length
  3. Explain the impact of service
  4. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  5. Correct a comma mistake
  6. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  7. Improve your topic sentence
  8. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  9. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  10. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  11. Correct a spelling mistake
  12. Fix a run-on sentence
  13. Describe a veteran's act of service
  14. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  15. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  16. Add a specific example
  17. Replace repetitive words
  18. Revise your thesis statement
  19. Combine two sentences
  20. Add a stronger hook
  21. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  22. Replace a weak verb
  23. Add a quotation
  24. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph