ReviseyourthesisstatementAdd astrongerhookAdd aquotationCorrect aspellingmistakeReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsRestateyour thesisin theconclusionDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceVary yoursentencelengthAdd aspecificexampleInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Explainthe impactof serviceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesCorrect acommamistakeAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsReplacea weakverbHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesImproveyour topicsentenceRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityFix afragmentReplacerepetitivewordsCombinetwosentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphFix arun-onsentenceReviseyourthesisstatementAdd astrongerhookAdd aquotationCorrect aspellingmistakeReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsRestateyour thesisin theconclusionDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceVary yoursentencelengthAdd aspecificexampleInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Explainthe impactof serviceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesCorrect acommamistakeAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsReplacea weakverbHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesImproveyour topicsentenceRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityFix afragmentReplacerepetitivewordsCombinetwosentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphFix arun-onsentence

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Revise your thesis statement
  2. Add a stronger hook
  3. Add a quotation
  4. Correct a spelling mistake
  5. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  6. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  7. Describe a veteran's act of service
  8. Vary your sentence length
  9. Add a specific example
  10. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  11. Explain the impact of service
  12. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  13. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  14. Correct a comma mistake
  15. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  16. Replace a weak verb
  17. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  18. Improve your topic sentence
  19. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  20. Fix a fragment
  21. Replace repetitive words
  22. Combine two sentences
  23. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  24. Fix a run-on sentence