Add atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Revise asentenceor sectionfor clarityExplainthe impactof serviceReplacerepetitivewordsAdd aspecificexampleVary yoursentencelengthReplacea weakverbReviseyourthesisstatementCorrect aspellingmistakeAdd aquotationCorrect acommamistakeReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceRestateyour thesisin theconclusionFix arun-onsentenceImproveyour topicsentenceHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesAdd astrongerhookCombinetwosentencesAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsFix afragmentStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Revise asentenceor sectionfor clarityExplainthe impactof serviceReplacerepetitivewordsAdd aspecificexampleVary yoursentencelengthReplacea weakverbReviseyourthesisstatementCorrect aspellingmistakeAdd aquotationCorrect acommamistakeReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceRestateyour thesisin theconclusionFix arun-onsentenceImproveyour topicsentenceHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesAdd astrongerhookCombinetwosentencesAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsFix afragmentStrengthenyourconclusionparagraph

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  2. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  3. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  4. Explain the impact of service
  5. Replace repetitive words
  6. Add a specific example
  7. Vary your sentence length
  8. Replace a weak verb
  9. Revise your thesis statement
  10. Correct a spelling mistake
  11. Add a quotation
  12. Correct a comma mistake
  13. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  14. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  15. Describe a veteran's act of service
  16. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  17. Fix a run-on sentence
  18. Improve your topic sentence
  19. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  20. Add a stronger hook
  21. Combine two sentences
  22. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  23. Fix a fragment
  24. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph