Include contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)End yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionCombinetwosentencesDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphAdd aspecificexampleAdd astrongerhookAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesReplacea weakverbRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityExplainthe impactof serviceCorrect acommamistakeAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsFix afragmentHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesReplacerepetitivewordsRestateyour thesisin theconclusionReviseyourthesisstatementReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsFix arun-onsentenceImproveyour topicsentenceAdd aquotationVary yoursentencelengthCorrect aspellingmistakeInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)End yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionCombinetwosentencesDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphAdd aspecificexampleAdd astrongerhookAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesReplacea weakverbRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityExplainthe impactof serviceCorrect acommamistakeAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsFix afragmentHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesReplacerepetitivewordsRestateyour thesisin theconclusionReviseyourthesisstatementReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsFix arun-onsentenceImproveyour topicsentenceAdd aquotationVary yoursentencelengthCorrect aspellingmistake

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  2. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  3. Combine two sentences
  4. Describe a veteran's act of service
  5. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  6. Add a specific example
  7. Add a stronger hook
  8. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  9. Replace a weak verb
  10. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  11. Explain the impact of service
  12. Correct a comma mistake
  13. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  14. Fix a fragment
  15. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  16. Replace repetitive words
  17. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  18. Revise your thesis statement
  19. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  20. Fix a run-on sentence
  21. Improve your topic sentence
  22. Add a quotation
  23. Vary your sentence length
  24. Correct a spelling mistake