Fix arun-onsentenceExplainthe impactof serviceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphVary yoursentencelengthAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsImproveyour topicsentenceFix afragmentReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsAdd aspecificexampleCorrect acommamistakeRestateyour thesisin theconclusionInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Add aquotationDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesReplacea weakverbCorrect aspellingmistakeAdd astrongerhookReplacerepetitivewordsRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityCombinetwosentencesReviseyourthesisstatementFix arun-onsentenceExplainthe impactof serviceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphVary yoursentencelengthAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsImproveyour topicsentenceFix afragmentReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsAdd aspecificexampleCorrect acommamistakeRestateyour thesisin theconclusionInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Add aquotationDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesReplacea weakverbCorrect aspellingmistakeAdd astrongerhookReplacerepetitivewordsRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityCombinetwosentencesReviseyourthesisstatement

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Fix a run-on sentence
  2. Explain the impact of service
  3. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  4. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  5. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  6. Vary your sentence length
  7. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  8. Improve your topic sentence
  9. Fix a fragment
  10. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  11. Add a specific example
  12. Correct a comma mistake
  13. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  14. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  15. Add a quotation
  16. Describe a veteran's act of service
  17. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  18. Replace a weak verb
  19. Correct a spelling mistake
  20. Add a stronger hook
  21. Replace repetitive words
  22. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  23. Combine two sentences
  24. Revise your thesis statement