CombinetwosentencesCorrect acommamistakeReviseyourthesisstatementAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsReplacerepetitivewordsAdd astrongerhookHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesExplainthe impactof serviceStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphFix arun-onsentenceDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceAdd aquotationReplacea weakverbRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityImproveyour topicsentenceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Correct aspellingmistakeAdd aspecificexampleVary yoursentencelengthAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesRestateyour thesisin theconclusionFix afragmentCombinetwosentencesCorrect acommamistakeReviseyourthesisstatementAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsReplacerepetitivewordsAdd astrongerhookHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesExplainthe impactof serviceStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphFix arun-onsentenceDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceAdd aquotationReplacea weakverbRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityImproveyour topicsentenceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Correct aspellingmistakeAdd aspecificexampleVary yoursentencelengthAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesRestateyour thesisin theconclusionFix afragment

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Combine two sentences
  2. Correct a comma mistake
  3. Revise your thesis statement
  4. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  5. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  6. Replace repetitive words
  7. Add a stronger hook
  8. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  9. Explain the impact of service
  10. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  11. Fix a run-on sentence
  12. Describe a veteran's act of service
  13. Add a quotation
  14. Replace a weak verb
  15. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  16. Improve your topic sentence
  17. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  18. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  19. Correct a spelling mistake
  20. Add a specific example
  21. Vary your sentence length
  22. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  23. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  24. Fix a fragment