Fix afragmentReviseyourthesisstatementAdd aspecificexampleReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsCombinetwosentencesFix arun-onsentenceCorrect aspellingmistakeExplainthe impactof serviceAdd aquotationAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceReplacea weakverbHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsImproveyour topicsentenceCorrect acommamistakeRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd astrongerhookVary yoursentencelengthReplacerepetitivewordsEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionRestateyour thesisin theconclusionInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)StrengthenyourconclusionparagraphFix afragmentReviseyourthesisstatementAdd aspecificexampleReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsCombinetwosentencesFix arun-onsentenceCorrect aspellingmistakeExplainthe impactof serviceAdd aquotationAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceReplacea weakverbHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsImproveyour topicsentenceCorrect acommamistakeRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd astrongerhookVary yoursentencelengthReplacerepetitivewordsEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionRestateyour thesisin theconclusionInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Strengthenyourconclusionparagraph

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Fix a fragment
  2. Revise your thesis statement
  3. Add a specific example
  4. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  5. Combine two sentences
  6. Fix a run-on sentence
  7. Correct a spelling mistake
  8. Explain the impact of service
  9. Add a quotation
  10. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  11. Describe a veteran's act of service
  12. Replace a weak verb
  13. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  14. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  15. Improve your topic sentence
  16. Correct a comma mistake
  17. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  18. Add a stronger hook
  19. Vary your sentence length
  20. Replace repetitive words
  21. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  22. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  23. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  24. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph