End yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionCombinetwosentencesAdd aspecificexampleDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceAdd aquotationExplainthe impactof serviceAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsFix afragmentRestateyour thesisin theconclusionReplacea weakverbAdd astrongerhookVary yoursentencelengthStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Replacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesReviseyourthesisstatementCorrect acommamistakeHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesFix arun-onsentenceReplacerepetitivewordsCorrect aspellingmistakeImproveyour topicsentenceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionCombinetwosentencesAdd aspecificexampleDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceAdd aquotationExplainthe impactof serviceAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsFix afragmentRestateyour thesisin theconclusionReplacea weakverbAdd astrongerhookVary yoursentencelengthStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Replacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesReviseyourthesisstatementCorrect acommamistakeHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesFix arun-onsentenceReplacerepetitivewordsCorrect aspellingmistakeImproveyour topicsentence

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  2. Combine two sentences
  3. Add a specific example
  4. Describe a veteran's act of service
  5. Add a quotation
  6. Explain the impact of service
  7. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  8. Fix a fragment
  9. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  10. Replace a weak verb
  11. Add a stronger hook
  12. Vary your sentence length
  13. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  14. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  15. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  16. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  17. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  18. Revise your thesis statement
  19. Correct a comma mistake
  20. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  21. Fix a run-on sentence
  22. Replace repetitive words
  23. Correct a spelling mistake
  24. Improve your topic sentence