Add astrongerhookFix arun-onsentenceCorrect acommamistakeFix afragmentExplainthe impactof serviceCombinetwosentencesReplacea weakverbAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsVary yoursentencelengthRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd aspecificexampleReviseyourthesisstatementDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionImproveyour topicsentenceInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Add atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesCorrect aspellingmistakeReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesAdd aquotationStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphRestateyour thesisin theconclusionReplacerepetitivewordsAdd astrongerhookFix arun-onsentenceCorrect acommamistakeFix afragmentExplainthe impactof serviceCombinetwosentencesReplacea weakverbAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsVary yoursentencelengthRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd aspecificexampleReviseyourthesisstatementDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionImproveyour topicsentenceInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Add atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesCorrect aspellingmistakeReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesAdd aquotationStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphRestateyour thesisin theconclusionReplacerepetitivewords

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Add a stronger hook
  2. Fix a run-on sentence
  3. Correct a comma mistake
  4. Fix a fragment
  5. Explain the impact of service
  6. Combine two sentences
  7. Replace a weak verb
  8. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  9. Vary your sentence length
  10. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  11. Add a specific example
  12. Revise your thesis statement
  13. Describe a veteran's act of service
  14. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  15. Improve your topic sentence
  16. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  17. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  18. Correct a spelling mistake
  19. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  20. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  21. Add a quotation
  22. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  23. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  24. Replace repetitive words