ReviseyourthesisstatementAdd aspecificexampleStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphRestateyour thesisin theconclusionReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsCombinetwosentencesAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesExplainthe impactof serviceCorrect aspellingmistakeCorrect acommamistakeDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceReplacea weakverbRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Vary yoursentencelengthReplacerepetitivewordsFix arun-onsentenceImproveyour topicsentenceAdd astrongerhookFix afragmentAdd aquotationReviseyourthesisstatementAdd aspecificexampleStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphRestateyour thesisin theconclusionReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsCombinetwosentencesAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesExplainthe impactof serviceCorrect aspellingmistakeCorrect acommamistakeDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceReplacea weakverbRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Vary yoursentencelengthReplacerepetitivewordsFix arun-onsentenceImproveyour topicsentenceAdd astrongerhookFix afragmentAdd aquotation

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Revise your thesis statement
  2. Add a specific example
  3. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  4. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  5. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  6. Combine two sentences
  7. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  8. Explain the impact of service
  9. Correct a spelling mistake
  10. Correct a comma mistake
  11. Describe a veteran's act of service
  12. Replace a weak verb
  13. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  14. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  15. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  16. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  17. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)
  18. Vary your sentence length
  19. Replace repetitive words
  20. Fix a run-on sentence
  21. Improve your topic sentence
  22. Add a stronger hook
  23. Fix a fragment
  24. Add a quotation