Explainthe impactof serviceDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionAdd astrongerhookAdd aquotationFix arun-onsentenceImproveyour topicsentenceReplacea weakverbCorrect aspellingmistakeReviseyourthesisstatementHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesVary yoursentencelengthCombinetwosentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphCorrect acommamistakeRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsFix afragmentAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsRestateyour thesisin theconclusionAdd aspecificexampleReplacerepetitivewordsInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)Explainthe impactof serviceDescribe aveteran'sact ofserviceEnd yourconclusionparagraph witha closingthought/call-to-actionAdd astrongerhookAdd aquotationFix arun-onsentenceImproveyour topicsentenceReplacea weakverbCorrect aspellingmistakeReviseyourthesisstatementHighlightveterans'contributions& sacrificesVary yoursentencelengthCombinetwosentencesStrengthenyourconclusionparagraphCorrect acommamistakeRevise asentenceor sectionfor clarityAdd atransitionbetweenparagraphsor sentencesReplacegeneralideas/wordswithspecificsFix afragmentAdd aconclusionsentence toall bodyparagraphsRestateyour thesisin theconclusionAdd aspecificexampleReplacerepetitivewordsInclude contextin yoursentences (nochoppysentences)

Veterans Day Tribute Revision Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Explain the impact of service
  2. Describe a veteran's act of service
  3. End your conclusion paragraph with a closing thought/call-to-action
  4. Add a stronger hook
  5. Add a quotation
  6. Fix a run-on sentence
  7. Improve your topic sentence
  8. Replace a weak verb
  9. Correct a spelling mistake
  10. Revise your thesis statement
  11. Highlight veterans' contributions & sacrifices
  12. Vary your sentence length
  13. Combine two sentences
  14. Strengthen your conclusion paragraph
  15. Correct a comma mistake
  16. Revise a sentence or section for clarity
  17. Add a transition between paragraphs or sentences
  18. Replace general ideas/words with specifics
  19. Fix a fragment
  20. Add a conclusion sentence to all body paragraphs
  21. Restate your thesis in the conclusion
  22. Add a specific example
  23. Replace repetitive words
  24. Include context in your sentences (no choppy sentences)