Sentencesare varied inlength andstructureTheintroductioncould be moreengaging tohook thereader.Transitionsbetweenparagraphsare smoothand logicalThe conclusionfeels incompleteor doesn’tsummarize themain ideas well.Transitionsbetweenparagraphsfeel abruptor unclearThe essay’sorganizationis confusingor needsimprovementThere arenoticeablegrammar,punctuation,or spellingerrorsSentencesare repetitiveor could usemore varietyThe essay iswell-organizedand easy tofollow.The essayneeds moreevidence orexamples tosupport thepointsThe voiceand tone areconsistentthroughoutThe topicsentencesare clearand supportthe thesisThe essayincludescreative oruniqueideas  Vocabularyisappropriateand preciseVocabularyused isappropriateand preciseTheconclusioneffectivelywraps upthe essayThe thesisstatementneeds to beclearer ormore specificThe thesisstatementis clear &specificThe topicsentences areunclear ordon’t supportthe thesiswellGrammar,punctuation,and spellingare correctEvidence andexampleseffectivelysupport themain pointsThe essaycould usemoreoriginality orcreative ideas vocabulary isunclear,repetitive, ortoo simple forthe topic  vocabulary isunclear,repetitive, ortoo simple forthe topic Introductiongrabs thereader'sattention wellThe voiceand tone areinconsistentor don’t fitthe topicSentencesare varied inlength andstructureTheintroductioncould be moreengaging tohook thereader.Transitionsbetweenparagraphsare smoothand logicalThe conclusionfeels incompleteor doesn’tsummarize themain ideas well.Transitionsbetweenparagraphsfeel abruptor unclearThe essay’sorganizationis confusingor needsimprovementThere arenoticeablegrammar,punctuation,or spellingerrorsSentencesare repetitiveor could usemore varietyThe essay iswell-organizedand easy tofollow.The essayneeds moreevidence orexamples tosupport thepointsThe voiceand tone areconsistentthroughoutThe topicsentencesare clearand supportthe thesisThe essayincludescreative oruniqueideas Vocabularyisappropriateand preciseVocabularyused isappropriateand preciseTheconclusioneffectivelywraps upthe essayThe thesisstatementneeds to beclearer ormore specificThe thesisstatementis clear &specificThe topicsentences areunclear ordon’t supportthe thesiswellGrammar,punctuation,and spellingare correctEvidence andexampleseffectivelysupport themain pointsThe essaycould usemoreoriginality orcreative ideas vocabulary isunclear,repetitive, ortoo simple forthe topic  vocabulary isunclear,repetitive, ortoo simple forthe topic Introductiongrabs thereader'sattention wellThe voiceand tone areinconsistentor don’t fitthe topic

Peer Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Sentences are varied in length and structure
  2. The introduction could be more engaging to hook the reader.
  3. Transitions between paragraphs are smooth and logical
  4. The conclusion feels incomplete or doesn’t summarize the main ideas well.
  5. Transitions between paragraphs feel abrupt or unclear
  6. The essay’s organization is confusing or needs improvement
  7. There are noticeable grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors
  8. Sentences are repetitive or could use more variety
  9. The essay is well- organized and easy to follow.
  10. The essay needs more evidence or examples to support the points
  11. The voice and tone are consistent throughout
  12. The topic sentences are clear and support the thesis
  13. The essay includes creative or unique ideas
  14. Vocabulary used is appropriate and precise
    Vocabulary is appropriate and precise
  15. The conclusion effectively wraps up the essay
  16. The thesis statement needs to be clearer or more specific
  17. The thesis statement is clear & specific
  18. The topic sentences are unclear or don’t support the thesis well
  19. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are correct
  20. Evidence and examples effectively support the main points
  21. The essay could use more originality or creative ideas
  22. vocabulary is unclear, repetitive, or too simple for the topic
    vocabulary is unclear, repetitive, or too simple for the topic
  23. Introduction grabs the reader's attention well
  24. The voice and tone are inconsistent or don’t fit the topic