The thesisstatementneeds to beclearer ormore specificTransitionsbetweenparagraphsare smoothand logicalEvidence andexampleseffectivelysupport themain pointsTransitionsbetweenparagraphsfeel abruptor unclearGrammar,punctuation,and spellingare correctThe thesisstatementis clear &specific vocabulary isunclear,repetitive, ortoo simple forthe topic  vocabulary isunclear,repetitive, ortoo simple forthe topicSentencesare varied inlength andstructureThe essay iswell-organizedand easy tofollow.The essaycould usemoreoriginality orcreative ideasThe voiceand tone areconsistentthroughoutThe essay’sorganizationis confusingor needsimprovementThere arenoticeablegrammar,punctuation,or spellingerrorsThe topicsentencesare clearand supportthe thesisSentencesare repetitiveor could usemore varietyThe voiceand tone areinconsistentor don’t fitthe topicThe essayneeds moreevidence orexamples tosupport thepointsTheconclusioneffectivelywraps upthe essayTheintroductioncould be moreengaging tohook thereader.  Vocabularyisappropriateand preciseVocabularyused isappropriateand preciseThe conclusionfeels incompleteor doesn’tsummarize themain ideas well. Introductiongrabs thereader'sattention wellThe topicsentences areunclear ordon’t supportthe thesiswellThe essayincludescreative oruniqueideasThe thesisstatementneeds to beclearer ormore specificTransitionsbetweenparagraphsare smoothand logicalEvidence andexampleseffectivelysupport themain pointsTransitionsbetweenparagraphsfeel abruptor unclearGrammar,punctuation,and spellingare correctThe thesisstatementis clear &specific vocabulary isunclear,repetitive, ortoo simple forthe topic  vocabulary isunclear,repetitive, ortoo simple forthe topicSentencesare varied inlength andstructureThe essay iswell-organizedand easy tofollow.The essaycould usemoreoriginality orcreative ideasThe voiceand tone areconsistentthroughoutThe essay’sorganizationis confusingor needsimprovementThere arenoticeablegrammar,punctuation,or spellingerrorsThe topicsentencesare clearand supportthe thesisSentencesare repetitiveor could usemore varietyThe voiceand tone areinconsistentor don’t fitthe topicThe essayneeds moreevidence orexamples tosupport thepointsTheconclusioneffectivelywraps upthe essayTheintroductioncould be moreengaging tohook thereader. Vocabularyisappropriateand preciseVocabularyused isappropriateand preciseThe conclusionfeels incompleteor doesn’tsummarize themain ideas well. Introductiongrabs thereader'sattention wellThe topicsentences areunclear ordon’t supportthe thesiswellThe essayincludescreative oruniqueideas

Peer Feedback Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. The thesis statement needs to be clearer or more specific
  2. Transitions between paragraphs are smooth and logical
  3. Evidence and examples effectively support the main points
  4. Transitions between paragraphs feel abrupt or unclear
  5. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are correct
  6. The thesis statement is clear & specific
  7. vocabulary is unclear, repetitive, or too simple for the topic
    vocabulary is unclear, repetitive, or too simple for the topic
  8. Sentences are varied in length and structure
  9. The essay is well- organized and easy to follow.
  10. The essay could use more originality or creative ideas
  11. The voice and tone are consistent throughout
  12. The essay’s organization is confusing or needs improvement
  13. There are noticeable grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors
  14. The topic sentences are clear and support the thesis
  15. Sentences are repetitive or could use more variety
  16. The voice and tone are inconsistent or don’t fit the topic
  17. The essay needs more evidence or examples to support the points
  18. The conclusion effectively wraps up the essay
  19. The introduction could be more engaging to hook the reader.
  20. Vocabulary used is appropriate and precise
    Vocabulary is appropriate and precise
  21. The conclusion feels incomplete or doesn’t summarize the main ideas well.
  22. Introduction grabs the reader's attention well
  23. The topic sentences are unclear or don’t support the thesis well
  24. The essay includes creative or unique ideas