Used asensorydetailUsedpeerfeedbackWrote aline ofdialogueSharedwith afriendReadwritingout loudRemovedan extrawordCheckedor addedtitleReplaceda boringwordReplacedarepeatedwordCapitalisednamesHookedthe readerearlyDescribedthesettingAdded adescribingwordClearendingaddedParagraphbreakaddedCapitalletters atsentencestartFixed aspellingmistakeJoinedshortsentencesAllsentencesmakesenseShowedafeelingTensestays thesameQuotationmarks fordialogueProudof achange ActionshowsemotionCorrectsentencepunctuationUsed asensorydetailUsedpeerfeedbackWrote aline ofdialogueSharedwith afriendReadwritingout loudRemovedan extrawordCheckedor addedtitleReplaceda boringwordReplacedarepeatedwordCapitalisednamesHookedthe readerearlyDescribedthesettingAdded adescribingwordClearendingaddedParagraphbreakaddedCapitalletters atsentencestartFixed aspellingmistakeJoinedshortsentencesAllsentencesmakesenseShowedafeelingTensestays thesameQuotationmarks fordialogueProudof achange ActionshowsemotionCorrectsentencepunctuation

Proofreading - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


1
B
2
N
3
O
4
O
5
G
6
G
7
O
8
I
9
I
10
I
11
B
12
G
13
N
14
I
15
G
16
B
17
B
18
N
19
I
20
B
21
O
22
N
23
G
24
N
25
O
  1. B-Used a sensory detail
  2. N-Used peer feedback
  3. O-Wrote a line of dialogue
  4. O-Shared with a friend
  5. G-Read writing out loud
  6. G-Removed an extra word
  7. O-Checked or added title
  8. I-Replaced a boring word
  9. I-Replaced a repeated word
  10. I-Capitalised names
  11. B-Hooked the reader early
  12. G-Described the setting
  13. N-Added a describing word
  14. I-Clear ending added
  15. G-Paragraph break added
  16. B-Capital letters at sentence start
  17. B-Fixed a spelling mistake
  18. N-Joined short sentences
  19. I-All sentences make sense
  20. B-Showed a feeling
  21. O-Tense stays the same
  22. N-Quotation marks for dialogue
  23. G-Proud of a change
  24. N-Action shows emotion
  25. O-Correct sentence punctuation