Use of firstor secondpersonpronounsVariations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Ms Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Ms Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???One-linerelaborationMadesweepingstatements /assumptionsMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??MissinghookLast sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsUse of firstor secondpersonpronounsVariations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Ms Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Ms Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???One-linerelaborationMadesweepingstatements /assumptionsMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??MissinghookLast sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my points

My Discursive/Argumentative ERRORS - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Use of first or second person pronouns
  2. Variations of "In this essay, I will..." or "Here are some reasons..."
  3. Ms Teoh's comment: you are just describing...you are not explaining...
  4. Ms Teoh's comment: If this is the counterargument, where is the rebuttal???
  5. One-liner elaboration
  6. Made sweeping statements / assumptions
  7. Ms Teoh's comment: How is this distinctly different from the previous paragraph??
  8. Missing hook
  9. Last sentence of my introduction is not a clear thesis statement with my points