Ms Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???MissinghookMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??One-linerelaborationLast sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsVariations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Ms Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Use of firstor secondpersonpronounsMadesweepingstatements /assumptionsMs Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???MissinghookMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??One-linerelaborationLast sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsVariations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Ms Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Use of firstor secondpersonpronounsMadesweepingstatements /assumptions

My Discursive/Argumentative ERRORS - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Ms Teoh's comment: If this is the counterargument, where is the rebuttal???
  2. Missing hook
  3. Ms Teoh's comment: How is this distinctly different from the previous paragraph??
  4. One-liner elaboration
  5. Last sentence of my introduction is not a clear thesis statement with my points
  6. Variations of "In this essay, I will..." or "Here are some reasons..."
  7. Ms Teoh's comment: you are just describing...you are not explaining...
  8. Use of first or second person pronouns
  9. Made sweeping statements / assumptions