Ms Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Last sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsMissinghookOne-linerelaborationMs Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???Ms Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??Madesweepingstatements /assumptionsVariations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Use of firstor secondpersonpronounsMs Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Last sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsMissinghookOne-linerelaborationMs Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???Ms Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??Madesweepingstatements /assumptionsVariations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Use of firstor secondpersonpronouns

My Discursive/Argumentative ERRORS - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Ms Teoh's comment: you are just describing...you are not explaining...
  2. Last sentence of my introduction is not a clear thesis statement with my points
  3. Missing hook
  4. One-liner elaboration
  5. Ms Teoh's comment: If this is the counterargument, where is the rebuttal???
  6. Ms Teoh's comment: How is this distinctly different from the previous paragraph??
  7. Made sweeping statements / assumptions
  8. Variations of "In this essay, I will..." or "Here are some reasons..."
  9. Use of first or second person pronouns