Variations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Last sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsOne-linerelaborationMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??Use of firstor secondpersonpronounsMadesweepingstatements /assumptionsMissinghookMs Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Ms Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???Variations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Last sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsOne-linerelaborationMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??Use of firstor secondpersonpronounsMadesweepingstatements /assumptionsMissinghookMs Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Ms Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???

My Discursive/Argumentative ERRORS - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Variations of "In this essay, I will..." or "Here are some reasons..."
  2. Last sentence of my introduction is not a clear thesis statement with my points
  3. One-liner elaboration
  4. Ms Teoh's comment: How is this distinctly different from the previous paragraph??
  5. Use of first or second person pronouns
  6. Made sweeping statements / assumptions
  7. Missing hook
  8. Ms Teoh's comment: you are just describing...you are not explaining...
  9. Ms Teoh's comment: If this is the counterargument, where is the rebuttal???