Ms Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??Variations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."One-linerelaborationMs Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???MissinghookLast sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsUse of firstor secondpersonpronounsMs Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Madesweepingstatements /assumptionsMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??Variations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."One-linerelaborationMs Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???MissinghookLast sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsUse of firstor secondpersonpronounsMs Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Madesweepingstatements /assumptions

My Discursive/Argumentative ERRORS - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Ms Teoh's comment: How is this distinctly different from the previous paragraph??
  2. Variations of "In this essay, I will..." or "Here are some reasons..."
  3. One-liner elaboration
  4. Ms Teoh's comment: If this is the counterargument, where is the rebuttal???
  5. Missing hook
  6. Last sentence of my introduction is not a clear thesis statement with my points
  7. Use of first or second person pronouns
  8. Ms Teoh's comment: you are just describing...you are not explaining...
  9. Made sweeping statements / assumptions