Ms Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???Variations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Last sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsMadesweepingstatements /assumptionsUse of firstor secondpersonpronounsOne-linerelaborationMissinghookMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??Ms Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...Ms Teoh'scomment: If thisis thecounterargument,where is therebuttal???Variations of"In this essay, Iwill..." or "Hereare somereasons..."Last sentence ofmy introductionis not a clearthesis statementwith my pointsMadesweepingstatements /assumptionsUse of firstor secondpersonpronounsOne-linerelaborationMissinghookMs Teoh'scomment: Howis this distinctlydifferent fromthe previousparagraph??Ms Teoh'scomment: youare justdescribing...youare notexplaining...

My Discursive/Argumentative ERRORS - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Ms Teoh's comment: If this is the counterargument, where is the rebuttal???
  2. Variations of "In this essay, I will..." or "Here are some reasons..."
  3. Last sentence of my introduction is not a clear thesis statement with my points
  4. Made sweeping statements / assumptions
  5. Use of first or second person pronouns
  6. One-liner elaboration
  7. Missing hook
  8. Ms Teoh's comment: How is this distinctly different from the previous paragraph??
  9. Ms Teoh's comment: you are just describing...you are not explaining...