Topic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceVaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)Need to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Introduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderMore detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itDid not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.Topic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceVaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)Need to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Introduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderMore detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itDid not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.

'Wizard of Earthsea' - Bad English BINGO - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Topic sentence missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not the composer or the question
  2. Missing capital letters in the text title ('The Wizard of Earthsea')
  3. Did not introduce a quote - just used it to start a sentence
  4. Vague statements - "his character changed" or "due to his experiences"
  5. Introduction - did not include full composer name (Ursula Le Guin)
  6. Need to work on academic language (AL written at least three times)
  7. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  8. Introduction - did not include textual form (novel)
  9. Used first person - instead of the reader or responder
  10. More detail needed (+? written at least three times)
  11. Introduction - text title not underlined or in 'single inverted commas'
  12. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  13. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  14. Did not clearly link back to the question at the end of a paragraph
  15. Names a concept (power or responsibility) but did not explain what ABOUT it is conveyed
  16. Incomplete conclusion OR did not restate title, composer name, form and link back to question.