Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceMore detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Did not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphVaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Need to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderTopic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Introduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Incompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceMore detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Did not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphVaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Need to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderTopic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Introduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Incompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.

'Wizard of Earthsea' - Bad English BINGO - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Did not introduce a quote - just used it to start a sentence
  2. More detail needed (+? written at least three times)
  3. Did not clearly link back to the question at the end of a paragraph
  4. Vague statements - "his character changed" or "due to his experiences"
  5. Need to work on academic language (AL written at least three times)
  6. Used first person - instead of the reader or responder
  7. Topic sentence missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not the composer or the question
  8. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  9. Introduction - text title not underlined or in 'single inverted commas'
  10. Introduction - did not include full composer name (Ursula Le Guin)
  11. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  12. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  13. Names a concept (power or responsibility) but did not explain what ABOUT it is conveyed
  14. Missing capital letters in the text title ('The Wizard of Earthsea')
  15. Introduction - did not include textual form (novel)
  16. Incomplete conclusion OR did not restate title, composer name, form and link back to question.