Introduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIntroduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Vaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)More detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Incompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNeed to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Topic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionDid not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphIntroduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIntroduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Vaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)More detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Incompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNeed to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Topic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionDid not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraph

'Wizard of Earthsea' - Bad English BINGO - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Introduction - did not include textual form (novel)
  2. Used first person - instead of the reader or responder
  3. Names a concept (power or responsibility) but did not explain what ABOUT it is conveyed
  4. Introduction - text title not underlined or in 'single inverted commas'
  5. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  6. Did not introduce a quote - just used it to start a sentence
  7. Missing capital letters in the text title ('The Wizard of Earthsea')
  8. Vague statements - "his character changed" or "due to his experiences"
  9. Introduction - did not include full composer name (Ursula Le Guin)
  10. More detail needed (+? written at least three times)
  11. Incomplete conclusion OR did not restate title, composer name, form and link back to question.
  12. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  13. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  14. Need to work on academic language (AL written at least three times)
  15. Topic sentence missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not the composer or the question
  16. Did not clearly link back to the question at the end of a paragraph