Names a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.Did not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Vaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Missingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')More detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itUsed firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itTopic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionIntroduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)Introduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceNeed to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Names a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.Did not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Vaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Missingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')More detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itUsed firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderNo textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itTopic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionIntroduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)Introduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceNeed to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)

'Wizard of Earthsea' - Bad English BINGO - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Names a concept (power or responsibility) but did not explain what ABOUT it is conveyed
  2. Incomplete conclusion OR did not restate title, composer name, form and link back to question.
  3. Did not clearly link back to the question at the end of a paragraph
  4. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  5. Vague statements - "his character changed" or "due to his experiences"
  6. Missing capital letters in the text title ('The Wizard of Earthsea')
  7. More detail needed (+? written at least three times)
  8. Introduction - text title not underlined or in 'single inverted commas'
  9. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  10. Used first person - instead of the reader or responder
  11. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  12. Topic sentence missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not the composer or the question
  13. Introduction - did not include full composer name (Ursula Le Guin)
  14. Introduction - did not include textual form (novel)
  15. Did not introduce a quote - just used it to start a sentence
  16. Need to work on academic language (AL written at least three times)