No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itVaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Names a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedMore detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceIntroduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Did not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphTopic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNeed to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itVaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Names a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedMore detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceIntroduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Did not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphTopic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNeed to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)

'Wizard of Earthsea' - Bad English BINGO - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  2. Vague statements - "his character changed" or "due to his experiences"
  3. Names a concept (power or responsibility) but did not explain what ABOUT it is conveyed
  4. More detail needed (+? written at least three times)
  5. Did not introduce a quote - just used it to start a sentence
  6. Introduction - did not include textual form (novel)
  7. Did not clearly link back to the question at the end of a paragraph
  8. Topic sentence missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not the composer or the question
  9. Missing capital letters in the text title ('The Wizard of Earthsea')
  10. Used first person - instead of the reader or responder
  11. Incomplete conclusion OR did not restate title, composer name, form and link back to question.
  12. Introduction - text title not underlined or in 'single inverted commas'
  13. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  14. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  15. Need to work on academic language (AL written at least three times)
  16. Introduction - did not include full composer name (Ursula Le Guin)