Topic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionDid not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphIntroduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Missingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Need to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itDid notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceMore detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)Vaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'Topic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionDid not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphIntroduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Missingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Need to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIncompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Used firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itDid notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceMore detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Introduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)Vaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"Introduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'

'Wizard of Earthsea' - Bad English BINGO - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
  1. Topic sentence missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not the composer or the question
  2. Did not clearly link back to the question at the end of a paragraph
  3. Introduction - did not include textual form (novel)
  4. Missing capital letters in the text title ('The Wizard of Earthsea')
  5. Need to work on academic language (AL written at least three times)
  6. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  7. Names a concept (power or responsibility) but did not explain what ABOUT it is conveyed
  8. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  9. Used first person - instead of the reader or responder
  10. Incomplete conclusion OR did not restate title, composer name, form and link back to question.
  11. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  12. Did not introduce a quote - just used it to start a sentence
  13. More detail needed (+? written at least three times)
  14. Introduction - did not include full composer name (Ursula Le Guin)
  15. Vague statements - "his character changed" or "due to his experiences"
  16. Introduction - text title not underlined or in 'single inverted commas'