Did not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIntroduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'More detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Topic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionUsed firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderIntroduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Vaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceIntroduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)Need to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')Did not clearlylink back tothe questionat the end of aparagraphNames a concept(power orresponsibility) butdid not explainwhat ABOUT it isconveyedIntroduction -text title notunderlined or in'single invertedcommas'More detailneeded (+?written atleast threetimes)Incompleteresponse (needto practisewriting undertimedconditions)Topic sentencemissing - juststarted discussingthe plot orcharacters, not thecomposer or thequestionUsed firstperson -instead ofthe reader orresponderIntroduction -did notincludetextual form(novel)Vaguestatements -"his characterchanged" or"due to hisexperiences"No analysis(techniques)or a wholeparagraphwithout itIncompleteconclusion OR didnot restate title,composer name,form and link backto question.Did notintroduce aquote - justused it to starta sentenceIntroduction -did not includefull composername (UrsulaLe Guin)Need to workon academiclanguage (ALwritten at leastthree times)No textualevidence(quotes) or awholeparagraphwithout itMissingcapital lettersin the text title('The Wizardof Earthsea')

'Wizard of Earthsea' - Bad English BINGO - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Did not clearly link back to the question at the end of a paragraph
  2. Names a concept (power or responsibility) but did not explain what ABOUT it is conveyed
  3. Introduction - text title not underlined or in 'single inverted commas'
  4. More detail needed (+? written at least three times)
  5. Incomplete response (need to practise writing under timed conditions)
  6. Topic sentence missing - just started discussing the plot or characters, not the composer or the question
  7. Used first person - instead of the reader or responder
  8. Introduction - did not include textual form (novel)
  9. Vague statements - "his character changed" or "due to his experiences"
  10. No analysis (techniques) or a whole paragraph without it
  11. Incomplete conclusion OR did not restate title, composer name, form and link back to question.
  12. Did not introduce a quote - just used it to start a sentence
  13. Introduction - did not include full composer name (Ursula Le Guin)
  14. Need to work on academic language (AL written at least three times)
  15. No textual evidence (quotes) or a whole paragraph without it
  16. Missing capital letters in the text title ('The Wizard of Earthsea')