Reorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceReverse-outlinedyour draftMoved aparagraphto improveflowSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedCut 20%of asectionRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Cut atleast oneparagraphSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)Read a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)FinaldraftdoneRemovedredundancyMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Reorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceReverse-outlinedyour draftMoved aparagraphto improveflowSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedCut 20%of asectionRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Cut atleast oneparagraphSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)Read a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)FinaldraftdoneRemovedredundancyMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”

Chapter 21 Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Reorganized a section to clarify your narrative arc
  2. Added or strengthened a topic sentence
  3. Reverse-outlined your draft
  4. Moved a paragraph to improve flow
  5. Simplified a complex idea into clearer language
  6. Rewrote your introduction AFTER finishing the results/discussion
  7. Wrote a one-sentence summary of your whole paper
  8. Deleted a sentence you secretly loved
  9. Cut 20% of a section
  10. Removed a tangent that didn’t support your argument
  11. Added a conclusion sentence to a paragraph that just “stopped”
  12. Cut at least one paragraph
  13. Set the draft aside and came back with fresh eyes
  14. Split a long paragraph into smaller, focused ones
  15. Removed filler words (“in order to,” “very,” “due to the fact…”)
  16. Read a section aloud to locate awkward or unclear phrasing
  17. Improved transitions between paragraphs
  18. Fixed a confusing pronoun (“this,” “that,” “they”)
  19. Final draft done
  20. Removed redundancy
  21. Merged two paragraphs into one clearer paragraph
  22. Ensured every section directly answers the research question
  23. Checked whether each paragraph has ONE clear idea
  24. Printed or changed the font to “see it differently”