Simplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Removedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)RemovedredundancyRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsCut atleast oneparagraphAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceFinaldraftdoneReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcCut 20%of asectionRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Reverse-outlinedyour draftMoved aparagraphto improveflowEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Merged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Removedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)RemovedredundancyRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsCut atleast oneparagraphAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceFinaldraftdoneReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcCut 20%of asectionRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Reverse-outlinedyour draftMoved aparagraphto improveflowEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Merged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphDeleted asentenceyou secretlyloved

Chapter 21 Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Simplified a complex idea into clearer language
  2. Set the draft aside and came back with fresh eyes
  3. Fixed a confusing pronoun (“this,” “that,” “they”)
  4. Removed filler words (“in order to,” “very,” “due to the fact…”)
  5. Removed redundancy
  6. Rewrote your introduction AFTER finishing the results/discussion
  7. Removed a tangent that didn’t support your argument
  8. Improved transitions between paragraphs
  9. Cut at least one paragraph
  10. Added or strengthened a topic sentence
  11. Final draft done
  12. Reorganized a section to clarify your narrative arc
  13. Cut 20% of a section
  14. Read a section aloud to locate awkward or unclear phrasing
  15. Checked whether each paragraph has ONE clear idea
  16. Added a conclusion sentence to a paragraph that just “stopped”
  17. Reverse-outlined your draft
  18. Moved a paragraph to improve flow
  19. Ensured every section directly answers the research question
  20. Split a long paragraph into smaller, focused ones
  21. Wrote a one-sentence summary of your whole paper
  22. Printed or changed the font to “see it differently”
  23. Merged two paragraphs into one clearer paragraph
  24. Deleted a sentence you secretly loved