Fixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Split a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Ensured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesRemovedredundancySimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageReverse-outlinedyour draftFinaldraftdoneMoved aparagraphto improveflowAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Cut 20%of asectionDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)Merged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcCut atleast oneparagraphFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Split a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Ensured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesRemovedredundancySimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageReverse-outlinedyour draftFinaldraftdoneMoved aparagraphto improveflowAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Cut 20%of asectionDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)Merged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcCut atleast oneparagraph

Chapter 21 Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Fixed a confusing pronoun (“this,” “that,” “they”)
  2. Split a long paragraph into smaller, focused ones
  3. Removed a tangent that didn’t support your argument
  4. Checked whether each paragraph has ONE clear idea
  5. Rewrote your introduction AFTER finishing the results/discussion
  6. Wrote a one-sentence summary of your whole paper
  7. Printed or changed the font to “see it differently”
  8. Ensured every section directly answers the research question
  9. Set the draft aside and came back with fresh eyes
  10. Removed redundancy
  11. Simplified a complex idea into clearer language
  12. Reverse-outlined your draft
  13. Final draft done
  14. Moved a paragraph to improve flow
  15. Added or strengthened a topic sentence
  16. Read a section aloud to locate awkward or unclear phrasing
  17. Added a conclusion sentence to a paragraph that just “stopped”
  18. Cut 20% of a section
  19. Deleted a sentence you secretly loved
  20. Removed filler words (“in order to,” “very,” “due to the fact…”)
  21. Merged two paragraphs into one clearer paragraph
  22. Improved transitions between paragraphs
  23. Reorganized a section to clarify your narrative arc
  24. Cut at least one paragraph