Fixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Cut 20%of asectionSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Deleted asentenceyou secretlylovedWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Read a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsFinaldraftdoneCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)RemovedredundancyAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageReverse-outlinedyour draftCut atleast oneparagraphMoved aparagraphto improveflowEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Cut 20%of asectionSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Deleted asentenceyou secretlylovedWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Read a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsFinaldraftdoneCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)RemovedredundancyAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageReverse-outlinedyour draftCut atleast oneparagraphMoved aparagraphto improveflowEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussion

Chapter 21 Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Fixed a confusing pronoun (“this,” “that,” “they”)
  2. Cut 20% of a section
  3. Split a long paragraph into smaller, focused ones
  4. Added a conclusion sentence to a paragraph that just “stopped”
  5. Deleted a sentence you secretly loved
  6. Wrote a one-sentence summary of your whole paper
  7. Printed or changed the font to “see it differently”
  8. Read a section aloud to locate awkward or unclear phrasing
  9. Improved transitions between paragraphs
  10. Final draft done
  11. Checked whether each paragraph has ONE clear idea
  12. Reorganized a section to clarify your narrative arc
  13. Removed filler words (“in order to,” “very,” “due to the fact…”)
  14. Removed redundancy
  15. Added or strengthened a topic sentence
  16. Merged two paragraphs into one clearer paragraph
  17. Removed a tangent that didn’t support your argument
  18. Simplified a complex idea into clearer language
  19. Reverse-outlined your draft
  20. Cut at least one paragraph
  21. Moved a paragraph to improve flow
  22. Ensured every section directly answers the research question
  23. Set the draft aside and came back with fresh eyes
  24. Rewrote your introduction AFTER finishing the results/discussion