Merged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)Removed atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Cut atleast oneparagraphReverse-outlinedyour draftFinaldraftdoneDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Ensured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingRemovedredundancyMoved aparagraphto improveflowCut 20%of asectionImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Checkedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)Removed atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Cut atleast oneparagraphReverse-outlinedyour draftFinaldraftdoneDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Ensured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingRemovedredundancyMoved aparagraphto improveflowCut 20%of asectionImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Checkedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyes

Chapter 21 Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Merged two paragraphs into one clearer paragraph
  2. Simplified a complex idea into clearer language
  3. Removed filler words (“in order to,” “very,” “due to the fact…”)
  4. Removed a tangent that didn’t support your argument
  5. Rewrote your introduction AFTER finishing the results/discussion
  6. Split a long paragraph into smaller, focused ones
  7. Added or strengthened a topic sentence
  8. Reorganized a section to clarify your narrative arc
  9. Wrote a one-sentence summary of your whole paper
  10. Added a conclusion sentence to a paragraph that just “stopped”
  11. Cut at least one paragraph
  12. Reverse-outlined your draft
  13. Final draft done
  14. Deleted a sentence you secretly loved
  15. Printed or changed the font to “see it differently”
  16. Ensured every section directly answers the research question
  17. Read a section aloud to locate awkward or unclear phrasing
  18. Removed redundancy
  19. Moved a paragraph to improve flow
  20. Cut 20% of a section
  21. Improved transitions between paragraphs
  22. Fixed a confusing pronoun (“this,” “that,” “they”)
  23. Checked whether each paragraph has ONE clear idea
  24. Set the draft aside and came back with fresh eyes