Reverse-outlinedyour draftSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Added orstrengtheneda topicsentenceMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingCut atleast oneparagraphFinaldraftdoneRemovedredundancyWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Fixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Reorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentCut 20%of asectionSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageMoved aparagraphto improveflowRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)ImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionReverse-outlinedyour draftSet the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Added orstrengtheneda topicsentenceMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingCut atleast oneparagraphFinaldraftdoneRemovedredundancyWrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperAdded aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Fixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Reorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentCut 20%of asectionSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageMoved aparagraphto improveflowRemovedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)ImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestion

Chapter 21 Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


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  1. Reverse-outlined your draft
  2. Set the draft aside and came back with fresh eyes
  3. Printed or changed the font to “see it differently”
  4. Added or strengthened a topic sentence
  5. Merged two paragraphs into one clearer paragraph
  6. Checked whether each paragraph has ONE clear idea
  7. Read a section aloud to locate awkward or unclear phrasing
  8. Cut at least one paragraph
  9. Final draft done
  10. Removed redundancy
  11. Wrote a one-sentence summary of your whole paper
  12. Added a conclusion sentence to a paragraph that just “stopped”
  13. Fixed a confusing pronoun (“this,” “that,” “they”)
  14. Reorganized a section to clarify your narrative arc
  15. Removed a tangent that didn’t support your argument
  16. Cut 20% of a section
  17. Simplified a complex idea into clearer language
  18. Moved a paragraph to improve flow
  19. Removed filler words (“in order to,” “very,” “due to the fact…”)
  20. Improved transitions between paragraphs
  21. Rewrote your introduction AFTER finishing the results/discussion
  22. Deleted a sentence you secretly loved
  23. Split a long paragraph into smaller, focused ones
  24. Ensured every section directly answers the research question