Deleted asentenceyou secretlylovedRemovedredundancyPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Wrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsMoved aparagraphto improveflowCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaCut atleast oneparagraphMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Removedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)Added aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Set the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceReverse-outlinedyour draftFinaldraftdoneEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionCut 20%of asectionSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguageDeleted asentenceyou secretlylovedRemovedredundancyPrinted orchanged thefont to “seeit differently”Wrote a one-sentencesummary ofyour wholepaperSplit a longparagraphinto smaller,focusedonesImprovedtransitionsbetweenparagraphsMoved aparagraphto improveflowCheckedwhether eachparagraphhas ONEclear ideaCut atleast oneparagraphMerged twoparagraphsinto oneclearerparagraphReorganizeda section toclarify yournarrative arcRewrote yourintroductionAFTER finishingtheresults/discussionRemoved atangent thatdidn’tsupport yourargumentRead a sectionaloud to locateawkward orunclearphrasingFixed aconfusingpronoun(“this,” “that,”“they”)Removedfiller words(“in order to,”“very,” “dueto the fact…”)Added aconclusionsentence to aparagraph thatjust “stopped”Set the draftaside andcame backwith fresheyesAdded orstrengtheneda topicsentenceReverse-outlinedyour draftFinaldraftdoneEnsured everysection directlyanswers theresearchquestionCut 20%of asectionSimplified acomplexidea intoclearerlanguage

Chapter 21 Bingo - Call List

(Print) Use this randomly generated list as your call list when playing the game. There is no need to say the BINGO column name. Place some kind of mark (like an X, a checkmark, a dot, tally mark, etc) on each cell as you announce it, to keep track. You can also cut out each item, place them in a bag and pull words from the bag.


1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
  1. Deleted a sentence you secretly loved
  2. Removed redundancy
  3. Printed or changed the font to “see it differently”
  4. Wrote a one-sentence summary of your whole paper
  5. Split a long paragraph into smaller, focused ones
  6. Improved transitions between paragraphs
  7. Moved a paragraph to improve flow
  8. Checked whether each paragraph has ONE clear idea
  9. Cut at least one paragraph
  10. Merged two paragraphs into one clearer paragraph
  11. Reorganized a section to clarify your narrative arc
  12. Rewrote your introduction AFTER finishing the results/discussion
  13. Removed a tangent that didn’t support your argument
  14. Read a section aloud to locate awkward or unclear phrasing
  15. Fixed a confusing pronoun (“this,” “that,” “they”)
  16. Removed filler words (“in order to,” “very,” “due to the fact…”)
  17. Added a conclusion sentence to a paragraph that just “stopped”
  18. Set the draft aside and came back with fresh eyes
  19. Added or strengthened a topic sentence
  20. Reverse-outlined your draft
  21. Final draft done
  22. Ensured every section directly answers the research question
  23. Cut 20% of a section
  24. Simplified a complex idea into clearer language